Oh poor Seto! But it was so fun to read about... great story!

Aw. That's so sad. Who was that guy at the end though? He's so cruel. That was great even though it brought tears to my eyes, but that's ok. Great job! ^^

sheesh...your day must have really sucked. those KaibaCorp. employees are really mean, aren't they?

That was so sad... but it was such a good fic.
i hate the vice president! he must die
keep up the good work!

Please update.

T-T mokuba, and then seto? you monster. oh well good story! ^-^'

Wll, all I can say is that this was one depressing ** fanfic but very well written.

Tragic, tragic, tragic...poor Seto!

ack! sob...evil glassy...>< ah well...we love you anyway, i suppose...::wishes she could write fanfictions:: or anything for that matter...hm. i must say, i like this one more than your other ones...mainly because the other ones have Anzu...::flames:: ** it i detest her...but just in the anime. i like her a lot in the manga...anyway, alli is rambling, as she is wont to do. you would know...this is written beautifully, actually. what do you mean by that actually...? because most people wouldn't say a suicide story is pretty! oh. that. well i would! pleh! it brings out a lot of emotions...and tears...::weeps:: why mokuba?! he didn't deserve it! seto perhaps, but mokuba...? you sick twisted girl...XD ah well...ha-ah! alli actually read one of your fanfictions! considering she never goes to FF anymore and lives on fictionpress (literally. it's my pitiful life...) that's quite the accomplishment! but hey, i just wanted to randomly bother you. wait, i do that anyway...::cringe:: great job! eh, i really think we need to talk or something...i know this is awkward via a review...::glares at other reviewers:: wanna make something out of it!? but um...we never talk anymore, ever since...uhh...but it really sucks, we never talk anymore, and i miss you terribly, even when you're there w/ me...this sounds like an evanescence song...and please don't take this wrong...please stop rhyming...it just...i don't know...and you most likely don't know or realize it because i know, your horrible life is much more important to you than your whiny depressed friend who needs to get a ** grip and realize that her life is nowhere near as bad as yours, but you're sort of slowly killing me...i'm just writing this in a review because i really don't know how to talk to you otherwise, and i'm just awful at talking to people in person...i better go...i have a writing final i have no idea how to finish...or start, for that matter...ja'ne...i'll stop annoying you now...
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~~alli~~

WOW! That was awesome! Go you. I could picture it all. If I could be anyone I would be the secretary :) Just kidding.

That was a beautiful story! It was written very well. But I really don't like Seto's secretary what she said was so mean!

Wow. This was amazingly written. You put such strong emtions in your writing. I was at a loss for words, especially at the end part.

SO SAD! But yet beautifully writen. I LOVED it. Why did Mokuba have to die?

Well I guess if he didn't then Seto would never have motive to kill himself. And if he didn't kill himself, there would be no plot, and if there is no plot there is no story.

I'll shut up now. Goodbye. ^^ Good story.

WAI! He's dead!

It's so sad... both of them are gone... (cries)

You did a great job. You expressed the emotion, or lack of it, well. Such pain...

-Windswift ((+)~

Englasu:

Wow...Holy Ra...

||Eyes are very wide||

That was amazing! The whole cutting was wonderfully written, and so descriptive too. It was already extremely angsty, but the last scene with the Vice President - that pushed it over into the Beyond Excellent category.

I commend you, and once again, great job!

Hope you have a better day tommorow,
Kaehimi