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| Angel 2005-01-06 ch 2, anon. | abuseI really liked this, it showed alot of promise as a good story. I would very much like to read the rest of it. I couldn't really find anyting wrong with your story, there was enough background info so that I knew what was going on without draging on, and you are obviously going to include all the characters which is good. A very good start. |
| silvrwish111 2004-02-20 ch 2,  | abusei have to find out wat happens! pleez continue wit it! |
| Anna 2003-06-09 ch 2, anon. | abuseI like this story you should definitely continue it. I would like to find out what happens with Liz and the gang. |
| Laurie-Lee 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseYour plots are amazing me. CanMt wait to read more... |
| mysticvysgiyi 2003-06-05 ch 2, | abuseI like the plot you have so far, but the chapters are really short. I would like some longer chapters (So I can delay doin' Algebra homework!) please? I can't wiat to read more! Please update quickly! MysticVysgiyi~Erlinda |
| tanya 2003-06-02 ch 2, anon. | abusehey this si great i cant wait to see what happens |
| Chaosti 2003-05-31 ch 1, | abuseYou might want to consider checking to make sure all the names begin with capitol letters before you post chapters. Otherwise it was a great start and I can't wait til the next chapter is up. I hope there's alot of angst and Max doesn't see Liz again until after the baby is born. |