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GrandDuchessSasha
2007-01-09
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant. Ram Dass was my favorite character. I love it!
Trancos
2004-12-29
ch 1, anon.
abuseI really like the way you wrote that. You have a very clean style, that tells the story on it's own, almost effortlessly. I like the premise of this fic. I think that Ram Dass is a very interesting character, and the connection he and Sara share, India,leaves room to be explored.You should comtinue this fic.

~Trancos
Selena Fan
2003-12-10
ch 1,
abuseThank you for writing something on Ram Dass. I wondered what his story was, and you handled it well. You captured his longings eloquently, and Sara's too. I can't believe no one before me has reviewed, this is so good. I wish you would write more, but with the lack of feedback you've been getting, I can't imagine you would.
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