This is a really great piece of writing. Are you done with it or are you planning on writting more?

Hm, very intersting. I like it, but it would be confusing if you hadn't warned me about all of these chapters having no relationship with each other whatsoever. And you mentioned Tolkien in chapter 2 (well, his book really)! That really pleases me (I'm *very* interested in Tolkien [*cough*obsessed*cough*cough*].)! Keep writing though, it's nice!