this story is really sad but absolutely beautiful. harry love draco with all his heart and it was all pure love and i love that! poor draco but he's not going to ever doubt about harry's love for him!

In the second chapter, I had to reread to understand what the Chrystal Heart was. But when i did, I T_T. I personally think that maybe you should have wrote the part in the groceries, for people who needed a picture of ow their relationship is.

*cries* this is very very very sad...but in a way, the crystal heart story from demon diary was sadder...casue eveyone died and the evil lady stole the heart

yeah, i read about this from demon diary...IT WAS THE SADDESST THING EVER! *cries*

Quite enjoyable; though I have to admit I enjoyed the original version better. There was just something so tragic about it being his parents he had seen with the jem, and then it was the girl...
I think it would have read better with less explanation - there were times when it was necessary for you to go offsubject to explain something, which detracted from the power of the story.
There were two points which annoyed me, but then again I have been called a stickler. First, Draco seemed to catch on to just what the heart was too early. He said 'don't', before Harry said anything to suggest that he would have to do to give Draco the heart. And then, at the end, it seemed illogical (well, considering) that Harry would have that much time to talk after giving away the heart. It seemed like that would have fit better before the gift was given, and not afterwards.
All in all, highly enjoyable, though! It's such a great story, I was amazed to see a different version.

*sob*

* weeping *

No! Give it back! Put it back! Harry can't die!

Chocked...
Harry is dead? with his pure love, he heals Draco, with his own heart.
It's so sad but it becomes one of my favourite stories !

so is Harry dead or not?
if he is I may just have to kill u for making me cry
if he isn't then i won't get quite so upset

but either way it is a wonderful story and well written

TOT Crystal Heart made me cry. This made me cry. But they both were beautiful. I think this even had something that made it better than Crystal Heart.

no..nonononono harry's gonna give draco his heart to cure him right? o god...i knew this was gonna happen...the title attracted me..it looked so familar..then before i clicked it to read it i was like..'wasn't that a small side story in demon dairy?..(and then little images poped up...evil girl..those two guys..one of them giving up thier heart for the other...) then click...and it's the first thing you say...story from demon dairy'
tho i have to say...(even tho it sadens me to know one shall die) i like the whole harry potter twist
i really love the few stories i have read by you.
i also like the fact that you aren't all...ok..every thing will be all happy and cheerful...it's like what would happen if it were to actually happen in real life.
o.o er..this is a bit long ...so
bye. love, norma

Well, this is very Gift of the Magi-ish... in the very worst possible way. What an utterly predictable story, and what an utterly disappointing one. I was hoping the fact that it was so obvious meant that there was a twist ahead somewhere, a big surprise that was going to lead to a new an different ending. Unfortunately, that was not the case.

No! Must you end it the same way as the manga?! I was hoping they would get a happy ending instead, but Harry died anyway...*sniff*
You mean person! Don't they deserve a happily ever after? *cry*
*cough* Other than the uber-angsty ending, I love this story. I love how everyone seems to be IC, and still manages to exert an air of uniqueness. Wait. That made no sense. Um...
Forget what I just rambled. I love this story!

*sobs*

oh...my...god...beautiful...

wow...