Wow... normally I can't stand unhappy endings because I often can't handle them. And I'm pretty much a hysterical wreck right now, but that was beautiful. It was so moving and the development was so natural! I love how the relationships grew subtly and I'm sure each one really won over the readers. All the characters were written so well. Thank you so much for this story.

this is really good... i must admit, at first i was skeptical, but you soon won me over! good job with an amazing (or in your own words, KICK-**) plot! just one question...when she said she was dying, did she tell the others in the compartment? i didn't see that part.

I am crying my eyes out right now. i loved the whole story it kept my attention all the way through it and i was up until five in the morning because i couldnt stop,
I love the relationship between snape and hermione i can imagen them having one like that in the book. :)

it was beautiful.. ive really got no words
im still crying my eyes out
i just found your story this morning, but i know u wrote it years ago. but its always nice to know that somewhere someone appreciates, even 5 years later. so ill guess ill just say the obvious: you are a truly a great writer.
Erika

yeah, fighting chance! "Oh dear." lol, how many authors gang up on the main character like that?

please fix this problem! i don't want a tragedy on your hands! i hope this is where the adventure comes in.

... I am crying... I don't cry while reading... ok maybe that's an exaggeration. I don't cry when reading unless it is really good... I have not cried while reading since I read the last harry potter book and remembered that it was the last one and i could never read another one... and now I am cry over a fan fiction. man does this make me want to congratulate you or what. This is one of, if not The best fan fiction I have ever read. It contains parts that make me want to hug them, cry with them, kiss them, and even throttle them. It made me laugh and cry. I LOVE IT! keep writing your really good!

~Rushingriver

oh shite. she has AIDS! er--or something like that. eek! i don't want to cry!

Wow.
Hope's a masochistic lesbian.
who'da thunk it?

YOU are a very cruel, mean, person. You killed my favorite charector and made me cry. You are still a very good writer though...

Gosh those last few chapters made me cry so bad... >.< Thanks for writing such a good story, even if it was a few years back. ;]

Oh my gosh. The epilogue was beautiful and heartbreaking. I'm tearing up. I have one critique I would like to make, and that is that some of the story was confusing because it was very difficult to tell where the line between dreams and reality was. I love the plot though!

This is a very good story. I look forward to reading more of it ASAP.

I really like the story. I look forward to reading more of it later.

The more I read the story, the more I like it. I look forward to reading more of ASAP.