Reviews for My First Time
avp60685 4/24/07 . chapter 1
cute story! reminds me of something james in the spin city series would have told the others when things were boring at the office!
Kiz 8/22/06 . chapter 1
This is not an original work - this rhyme has been in circulation for decades. It also has absolutely no relation to Spin City. Pitiful and lame.
Case Number 241 9/6/04 . chapter 1
i've read that before! that so was not original!

shot at James, ne?
Nanaki BH 4/17/04 . chapter 1
I have never actually seen the show... but that was GREAT. XD Wow... Wow...
It kinda sounded like a rap or something. But man, that was hilarious!
tcahrmedone1988 2/17/04 . chapter 1
ur talkin about james?
jaka ray 9/9/03 . chapter 1
hahah! you really know how to write this stuff! i seriously thought you were talking aobut... *nudge*

of course, the really big letters at the end caught my eye.. why is this spin city? is it charlie or mike?
lildevil 5/31/03 . chapter 1
haha, funny. i thought you were talking bout... well you know. funny