This story was a joy to read from beginning to end. Well done.

As Jupiah says, a funny and light-hearted read, and not OOC. Could've used more detail, but that's just personal preference speaking (I'm partial to meg-sized multichapter monsters, heh).

@Firestarter: I believe that was supposed to be Aeka taking advantage of Sasami's talking in her sleep. Later on it mentions Sasami as Aeka's sister, not Washu. So there wasn't a mistake there.

@Zettai: Why can't you cowards actually write proper critiques, eh? As opposed to whining like a kicked puppy whenever you happen on stories that don't fit your preconceived notions? Fortunately the author didn't bother to stoop to your level to reply, but your kind usually takes silence to mean assent, so this little paragraph is meant to disabuse you of that fantasy. In case you're too stupid to understand that: there's something wrong with you, not the story. Learn how to write a review, or kindly stfu if you don't know how to.

Wow, this is one of the funniest stories I've ever read! A great plot, everyone is completely in character, and a believable and hilarious original character. It would make a great movie. Good job!

Great work! Loved it.

Howdy! I loved this story! Check ya! ~NeptuneLily~

GGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Wery well written. please write more

um kinda waffly in places. ayeka is not sasami's *mommy* nor washu's *sister*. its ok

god...no...pathetic...blaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah! no good no no no nooooooooooooooooooo

I *like* that ending!! And that story was funny as all get out! I'll be watching for more of your Tenchi stuff!

HUH?!?!

Great! Keep writing and tell me if you got more up!