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I really loved this trilogy! This story was amazing. I dont think I have read a story that had so many high and low points. Absolutly hooked! Your an amazing writer and I can't wait to see more of your work!

Very good trilogy. My only honest crticisms are that I prefer ensemble pieces more than the solo ones. Also, the highly compressed timeframe makes the story slightly unbelievable (besides vampires and hell gods I mean ;-). I don't care how strong Buffy is, or how endearing Harry is, no one goes what she went through over 10 or 12 months and comes out sane. A slightly longer time frame would work though.

There were also a few parts which I found a bit awkward, where my eyes just started skimming the text because it was another paragraph either just rehashing some emotional topic, or it was some lengthy internal character interlude which broke up the natural flow of character dialog. Such interludes sometimes forced me to to back up and reread the last dialog snippet to get my place, which the reader should never have to do. A more liberal application of "show, don't tell" would clear this up and would make the writing tighter IMO.

Don't get me wrong, your writing is worlds beyond the typical fanfic, which is why I'm even bothering to provide such lengthy, honest critcism. I've enjoyed all of your stories so far, so thanks! :-)

I LOVED this story and the one before it. I haven't actually read the 1st one of the trilogy yet since I didn't know about it (I was in the mood for a Harry/Buffy fic and googled it) but I do plan on reading it now to see what I missed. This was an excellent stroy with an extremely great, and well thought out plan. Hope you keep up the great work in all of your stories.

KZ

You said something ripped as Buffy took the key energy back into her. What are the consequences of that? YOu really should write a part 4! I love all of the three first parts. They were incredible. I liked this version better than Season 5, though Season 5 did have its moments. I'm glad you didn't let Buffy die. I'm glad there was no Dawn. All in all, I'm very happy at the moment, so continue writing. Hooray! Please write another sequel! Maybe with the First?

I don't normally review in the middle of the story when there is more behind it, but I LOVE the fact that you made Buffy the key. Dawn always bugged me. She was really whiny. And that scene in Season 7 where they kicked Buffy out of the house...ergh. That scene still makes my blood boil. Anyway. Going to read the rest now.

Wow, I loved this story, hell the whole trilogy. Great work.

I know I haven't reviewed any of the chapters of this trilogy, but I just had to comment now that I'm finished. Even though you wrote these stories around 3 years ago, they are still...in my opinion...the best Harry Potter/BTVS crossover that I have ever read. Come to think of it, these stories were 3 of the best fanfiction that I have ever read. Your characters, plots, attention to detail on all three series' was simply incredible. Thank you for taking the time to write these stories. I love your writing style, so I'm going to start reading your BTVS/LOTR crossover right now. I have never read a LOTR fanfiction story before so I'm quite excited to read yours. Thank you again for this wonderful escape

Sean

Though I'm sad to see this trilogy end, this last part was...well, filled with so much dying and defeat that I started questioning whether you'd just let the world end and be done with it afterall, but besides that...this entire thing was just a creation beyond amazing, and I can't say enough to justify how much I loved the entire trilogy. Thank you.

Great story,
keep up the good work.

3½ of 5

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I quite enjoyed this story and will eventually read your BtVS/LoTR story when I have time. I'm a big fan of Buffy/Harry and this is only the second really good story of it I've found. Others are just snippets or bad. I enjoyed the scope of the combined universe you created. This last part of the trilogy was my favorite. The readabilty was greatly improved upon and the plot rich and angstful. Not to mention the fun slaying of Harry and Buffy around the world. I think that was some of my favorite scenes.

Keep writing and reading, you're good at it!

Wow. That was awesome. Really. The last few chapters, I kept going "holy s**t, everyone's going to die!" Yet it was still more fun than my Physics homework, hmm...Anyway, as for which fic I liked best...I think I may have actually liked Twist of Fate best, despite the fact that I'd never heard of The Pretenders and it was very Pretender-heavy. It was very dark, and I like dark.

extremely good thanks

Cool story. I liked that third Slayer. Too bad her mind got vegged. And her watcher betrayed them all? And man, things are looking really, really bleak.

I read the parts 1,2,3 you're a genius.