nice

I NEED MORE!

(and as a french girl, I wanna tell you that your french is quite perfect! :3)

So... I drift to the next button and find there is no more.

I knew when I started reading it wasn't finished, and hadn't been for nigh five years, now. (I uttered a little cry when I did, because I was enchanted from the first chapter.) But I know the muse is a bitch, and we don't always finish what we want, and we change.

Still. I'm feeling something a little similar to love, a lot similar to the Matrix (your character voices are superb) and entirely the same as a wrenching disappointment that it's (not quite) over. Still, I shall reread, I shall favourite, and I shall let you know that I adored this.

"The next part will be up soon". SINCE WHEN DOES FIVE YEARS COUNT AS SOON? I HATE IT WHEN PEOPLE DO THIS TO THE STORIES I LOVE!

this is a great fic i cant wait till you get the next chappy up, when ever that is.

Oh my god
This is just.. GREAT! I really hope this fic is not dead because I can't wait for the next chapter!

Please update!

This story can fit so easily into the canon set by Revolutions, it's insane. At least, I can see it happening. Too bad I'd just really gotten into the story when there wasn't any more chapters to read! Please write more, your latest is your best chapter yet. I loved the meeting with the Oracle, hope she comes back in a later chapter. Can't wait to see when Smith confronts Neo again!

::drool::

Continue.

Love it. Love your style of writing, love your story.. I can *not* wait for you to write more.

Even if it isn't canon with the new movie out, I want to know where you are heading with this.

It's great. ::whimper, paw:: ;-; More.

You haft to update this, pretty please with sugar on top... I really, really like this!

Oh my God! OR should I say, oh my Smith! Wow! *fans herself* Hot dayum! The slash! The glorious slash! /More/

Tried to review on the group, but my posts seldom show up. -_-

So I came here! Because I had to leave some feedback just to let you know that I love this fic and REALLY want you to continue, because there's so much potential in it for sweet, slashy Neo/Smith-ness...

I like how you're writing this. It's not a regular fic that deals with both Neo and Smith... This is Smith figuring out what's going on and who he is. And what he wants! _

Please, please, please continue.

*Worships*

I cant believe Ive managed to overlook such a good fic for so long.I really enjoy your characterizations of Smith and Persephone(who I found somewhat two-dimensional in the movie)and how you let the slashyness slowly build up, instead of having Smith instantly falling head over heels for Neo.

Keep up the good work!

I always thought that Smith and Persephone could have a little romance. Gods, just LOOK AT HER! She's so hot... :) I mean, how could ANYONE resist her?