OKAY That was WAY to ** freaky.
I swear A-kun I WAS eating a plain bologna sandwich when I read that. I nearily choked on it and when i finally could breath again I looked down i spat it all over my Keyboard.

Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahah!
that was really funny, but I feel sorry for poor Iwata... Am I the only one who thinks he's cool?!
Anyway, great story. Update or I shall
sic my Rabid purple monkey/cat/hippos
on you. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!*lightning*

Hahahahahahahahahahahahhahahahahah!
that was really funny, but I feel sorry for poor Iwata... Am I the only one who thinks he's cool?!
Anyway, great story. Update or I shall
sic my Rabid purple monkey/cat/hippos
on you. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!*lightning*

*Curls up on the ground, dying slowly from laughter* I assume you don't have many reviews because people don't want to read a fic with Original Characters in it. They're all at a serious serious loss! I think you cracked my ribs! I laughed so hard it was truly and honestly painful. You can write in the honest to goodness Excel Saga style and you can do it well~ *Shakes head* I hope you update sometime, coz I'm loving this~~ I'll stick it in my favourites anyway. The only thing I could reccomend would be MORE Ilpalazzo, but you should utterly ignore that plea, because any plea from an obsessive fangirl including bishounen is always going to be biased and therefore would probably be dangerous to follow. Oh and your Excel was so very in character! Your fanfic is my saviour...

WAH! I love it! It's so funny, just like the show,
write more!

My friend was looking up ocarinas and she went to this website because I let her borrow my Excel Saga and she enjoyed it. Both me and my friend really enjoyed your story so much that it was hard not to burst out laughing in class. I especially like it because it has the "give my permission," the song lyrics, and the little part at the end. I hope you keep on writing more gut-bursting storys.:)

If I had any constructive crticism to offer, I'd hand it over... unfortunately, I was too busy trying to figure how you'd managed to smoke the same stuff Rikdo does to pay attention. Keep the whole "style of the actual show" thing going.

'Ello! I really liked the fanfictions. Excel Saga is a really funny anime! ^.^