Hey, I love this story very much. I'm a huge fan of Inuyasha & The Ronin Warriors. I usually tended to avoid RW/IY x-overs for some reason, but I saw yours and decided "what the hey" And now I LOVE IT. I just really do enjoy your story. But you should have had Sage take back his armor crystal when he pinned the Wench down in is ast scuffle, heh. Keep up the Brilliant work and add another chapter soon!

Trinity Date

Daughter of Sage Date and Lita Kino

Long Live SM/RW X-overs!

i love your story, i thave found one or 2 stories that are rw/inu, one is Forming unbreakable bonds by C.J Star and i am probaly going to try to find some one to help me with a challenge some one put out for rw/inu. if you want more info, email me. oh, adn what are the pairings besides ryo/lea?

Aw, come on! It's been over a year since you updated this! You can't just leave it here forever! Please, I'm begging you! I will be your biggest fan if you update! I will have fan club meetings in my house and bake cookies for everyone! Please!

Meh luve Seiji! *snickers* Inu needs to be more open same with Ryo... and it though Inu's Translation name was, Dog demon... unless the stupid english dub got me wrong. Anyways, hm I guess just keep going and I'll keep an eye on the perv XP. Hm Well I have nothing elce to say except that I'm going to save this fic. to my fav so I can keep track on your chap. _ Its good!

I love ROnin warriors and Inuyasha! Yay! But i thought Kagome's brother's name was Sota...Oh well, it doesn't really matter!

Really interesting. And you hit Inuyasha's ego right on the nose. I just thought of something that'll really get Inuyasha really miffed. Have one of the Ronins play with Inuyasha's ears or have Rowen flirt even harder with Kagome.
_- can't wait for an update!
Keep up the good work!
_Shinrai

I just found this story today, and have only read a little so far, which is why I'm reviewing chapter two and not the newest chapter. I haven't actually read any RW fanfiction in years, and for some reason today I just opened up this part of and started reading. This story really caught my eye because I also love Inuyasha, and because it was a cross-over I'd never even thought of before. I've gotta say, it's really intriguing.
However, you've got a lot of problems. Most of them are mechanical things, like putting the wrong word. For example, several times now you've written 'threw' instead of 'through'. And wrote 'Marshall' instead of 'martial'. The mistakes aren't so bad that I can't understand what you're trying to say, but they are getting annoying. You also seem to have a problem staying in one tense. You keep switching back and forth between past tense and present tense, which is a HUGE no-no. You need to just stay in the past tense.
Also, Kagome's little brother's name is Souta, yet you kept calling him Soyo. (I think maybe you confused his name with their cat's name, which is Boyo.)
You really need to get a beta reader. Your story is good, it just needs a little polish. I would offer my services to you as a beta, but I warn you first, I have been known to be a bit slow. And if you want me to, I'll do it as I read, which means I'd go through and edit the chapters you already have up before getting to the ones you're currently writing.
The last thing that confused me, was why does Kagome's grandfather want to seal the well? I mean, obviously this story is an AU (all crossovers are), but are you telling this story as if Kagome has never met Inuyasha or broken the jewel or anything? Because in the anime, all of Kagome's family knows and understands that she goes down the well because she has a duty to put the jewel of four souls back together. That was the last thing that confused me.
Please e-mail me () with answers, and whether or not you want me to beta for you. I really want to follow this story, but I can't if I don't understand it. If my e-mail doesn't work when you get this (my main computer is gonna be switched to a DSL connection in two days and my e-mail will change then as well,) then try e-mailing . (or maybe it’s . . . I can’t remember) Thank you.
And now to end this abnormally long review . . .

grins. Inuyasha just can't stop can he? very nice. and gomen ne about the spelling. I know comps can be a pain at times. Kepp up the great work. JA!

Oh boy is this story good. It just gets better and better. Update soon please!

Hey, like I told you before, I only just got into Inuyasha, but I really do love the story that you are working on. And I do notice some of the spelling mistakes, but that's okay. But, if you want and until your comp is up and running again, I could be a beta reader for you, if you'd like. I'm told by my friends that I have really good grammar and I'd like to help. All you'd have to do is send me the chapter before submitting it and I would make all the corrections, either with my word processor itself or on my own, then send it back to you. I don't change any of the story, just the grammar so you won't have to worry about anymore flames from that.
Email me on if you want to or not.
Either way, I think your story is awesome and I hope that you continue it! Good luck!

This is really getting good update soon. {why does'nt ryo just put on his armor and have the group make a large camp fire, When in his armor fire heals him and repairs his armor}

[To lazy to sign in]; Yeeouch... that had to hurt... poor Ryo-sama... ;
I hate that hoe of a woman... I forgot her name. Update soon! I wanna know what happens next!

Man oh man! Sage is in a world of trouble now! He's being threatend by a she demon, his armor orb is out of reach, and his life is on the line. And as for a certain monk, I would double check the availability of certain women BEFORE I go hitting on them! Might avoid a lot of slaps and bruises that way.

That was great! Keep up the excellent work! Update soon!

very nice. I am still thoroughly enjoying this. Poor Sage. I just had a bad feeling that was Naruko who he had come upon. Shakes her head. Keep up the great work cause I look forward to the next part.
Now not to criticise or anything, but you may want to run the last two parts through a a spell check and reread the top half of chapter 8. When Sage is escaping from Jassaya, you say he has his orb in his pocket and then later in the chapter you say he doesn't. I think you left out a word in one of the sentences. Hope I didn't offend or anything. I know I don't take this type of thing well but shrugs, it is still often appreciated. Keep up the great work.
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