Hey Dave, this is Cosmos! _ I really love your writing, so poignant but even though the imaginary Usagi was OOC in the manner of her word-usage, it's really clear that through her small actions and emotions that she's still the same.

So basically...

I really love it! _

Wow. . I almost spelled my own NAME wrong on the review. Oh! Yeah, the story. Reallyreally GREAT! *jumps around* Totally booyaka! *grin* Another story for my favorites when I sign in.

This is really good, and it seems to describe what he would be feeling. Great job!

Cool story.

wow. This is REALLY good. :)

God...I am almost completely speechless. This was incredible. Wonderful. Your Creative Writing teacher had better have liked this, or I will begin shouting "INJUSTICE!" to anyone around. This was wonderful, and it's great to see such good Mamoru-chan fics around here...*grin* This was incredibly suggoi. Keep it up. AngelAnne

This was really good! I hope your creative writing teacher appreciated it, I surely did. Thank you for spellchecking everything before uploading it, that helps a great deal. I wonder if Usagi will start calling Mamoru Mamo-chan yet.. oh well. Keep writing!

that was very good! please please continue this story!

That other Usagi had to be Serenity! Can we geta sequel over here?