Loved it! Please update soon!

Wow, it's been a long time since you've updated, but I haven't given up on this story! Please update soon! I really love this story.

It's been forever since I reviewed! Sorry! I really hope you update this! It's been so long and I can't wait to find out what happens to poor Misty! Please update soon!

Damn, this story sounded interesting in the summary, but the real thing is freakin' AWESOME! I love May/Haruka, and giving her pyrokinetic powers is perhaps expected (because of her Torchic) but masterfully done by your hand. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work. Cheers!

I have some questions to ask you about this fanfic. 1. What is this fanfic's plot? 2. When and/or where does it take place? 3. Just how old are those that are in this fanfic? 4. Just what Pokemon did Ash, Misty, and Brock have with them when this fanfic started? 5. They were the same Pokemon they had in the series, right? 6. They got those Pokemon at the same times and/or locations as in the series, right? 7. If not, then when and/or where? 8. Thet even got those Pokemon in the same ways as in the series, right? 9. Just how long have they had those Pokemon for, prior to this fanfic? 10. Did any of them ever evolve, prior to this fanfic? If so, which ones? Be sure to answer these questions. If you want, you can choose which ones you feel like answering at this time. Any left over can be answered either later or within this fanfic. And I will have some more questions to ask you to answer later.

Please updatefor this story is not crappy at all! Please, I'm dying to see what happens next!! PLEASE!

Please update for this story is not crappy at all! Please, I'm dying to see what happens next!! PLEASE!

Woohoo! I can finally get here!
You did say that the first version stunk! It's excellent! And the new version is even better!
I can't help but rave review, but I only briefly skimmed, because I don't want to wreck the story for when it comes out later at SPPf.
5/5 as always!
;)
-Misty's Kyogre

Fwee! New chapter!

Another great chapter with plenty of gore and violence in it :D Especially in the scene where Ash was struggling with the burning bag, which is my favourite in this chapter. A very twisty chapter this one - you never really now what's going to happen. Great chapter as always, and sorry for not actually reviewing the earlier ones *sweatdrops*

*blinks* ... ... ... um... update? Sorry about that. I'm in shock. *shakes head* Please update soon. Me go to know what happens.

Wow! That was great! Poor Misty... Though it was really cool! Thank you so much for updating! You don't know how much that means to me. You're the greatest fan fiction writer ever! I think this fic gets better and better. Hakaru(I think that's how you spell it) is so cool how she can control fire. Thanks again! Hope you have a great day! (^_~)

WA! I gotta read another chapter soon! I miss you keeping this updated! This is my favorite Pokemon fanfiction story! I hope ya update soon! I'm looking forward to it. I like in the fifth chapter that the pokemon can bleed. It's more realistic. Hope you update soon! Catcha Later! (^_^)

I hope you get your story done. I really want to read it. I've been waiting forever to finish it! Could you please put up another chapter?

ya know... this chapter is kinda... violent. if ya know what i mean...u know ...yeah. ok. all right. oh kay. bye. see ya. so long. later. bye.

(no! iran out of ... umm... what do u call then again? um... oh yeah! wait... no thats not it... now i know! it's called a ... um... now i forget! o well! wait they were called... synonyms! i think... well bye!) (*^_^*)

Your stories, this one and the one not long ago put up, are excellent. In fact, congratulations. You have entered the realm of my rare favorite author's list. ;)

Keep this up, I enjoyed reading every moment of it, an unlikely hood of me, but it was addicting. I do hope to see the next chapter soon. Good luck, and I would supply with criticism but I have spend half an hour trying to read all your stories.

So awesome job, I hope the later finished work are as good as this.

Oh, and I am LilyPichu from SPP. I enjoyed your one shot there as well, very interesting.

~LP