This bit into Mako's life was refreshing. It's like reading right into a journal. It sounds like something I would write in my journal, just little thoughts here and there.
You read and reviewed my story so I thought I'd come in and read some of your stuff. Looks good in here!
I wanted to write back to you and thank you for your review. I checked your litle page but you didn't post your email address so I thought, "what the heck. I might as well do some reading while I'm in here."
I don't know if you remeber what you wrote in your review for my little story, "A life for a life", basically that it was a bit disappointing and to be honest with you, I was a bit disappointed myself when I read over it. I know that's a good enough reason to take it off. I just wanted to feel like I got something done today, probably because I missed some of my morning classes :) I kind of rushed when I wrote this. Actually, kind of aren't the right words. I did rush when I wrote it. I'll be fixing it up. Keep on writing helpful reviews and thanks for yours. It's nice to know that there are actual readers out there. Thanks!
Echo Hunter

This is so cool. I love how this fic is coming out. I can not wait to hear more. I wish all of Mako-chan's dreams would come true. I love iron chef myself and I like to sit there and wish I could eat the food. Well update soon.