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Brindabella
2005-07-08
ch 15, anon.
abuseLoved it, but for some strange reason I don't really get it. I think I'm just having a slow day and I need to read it again. Or is it really cryptic? Nah nah I'm probably just being slow. Will get back to you ;)
jakc
2005-07-06
ch 15,
abusewith practice i reckon Jonesy could be a damn good romantic...so long as Susie stays out of the picture I am content. I loved this fic so much Emsta. Please write more Tess returns fics as seeing the whole Susie Jonesy thing unfold is making me upset. Thank goodness she's going out with that druggie but he won't stay long- they never do.
Brindabella
2005-07-02
ch 14,
abuseLoved it loved it loved it! Aw that was a sweet as chapter! Short, but still good. And bugger me, now I'm dying to read the epilogue! Give it to me!! hehe
jakc
2005-06-28
ch 14,
abuseAW! *claps hands excitedly* I love those warm and fuzzy scenes that make you feel good inside! Note to self: Hm...must add those to my fic! Anyhoo, this fic was great and i'm dying to read the epilogue!
Jiggly Wess
2005-03-29
ch 13,
abusewell for the first time i actually sat down and read the whole fic. i LOVED it. great work Emsta! ooh have you updated forgive us our sins or whateva it's called yet? cos i love that fic. you rtock girl!
maggielovespj
2005-03-22
ch 13,
abuselove it love it love it...
pls write more soon...
jakc
2005-03-18
ch 13,
abuseaw...you can't be winding it up! no! what am i gonna read now? Hmm that reminds me i have to start writing my BH fic hm... but but i need something to read in the mean time!

P.S: great chapter :)
P.P.S: hey what do you mean by generva?
Brindabella
2005-03-10
ch 13,
abuseGood chapter here sweetie! Well done, but I do agree with you that this is not your best chapter so far. Really just a rehashing of the episodes, as Em might say :o) Still, I liked it ok, it made me feel all nostalgic and I remembered back to the hot chocolate and vending machines, and 'Don't argue Tess, not this time, please' Aw I miss Tess!
Hope you write some more soon!
jakc
2005-01-26
ch 12,
abuseI meant what i said last time, all the TJ episode i ever watched were so bland and well basically boring. They'd be in love one day then hate eachother the next, it was a disturbing and quiet annoying pattern that formed but it was truly addictive. Anyway was i meant to say was the fic's great and i meant what i said about the whole script/story writing thing, they should have turned this fic into an episode, if they did it would have been brilliant, well it hasn't finished yet but brillant so far,
Brindabella
2005-01-24
ch 12,
abuseI'm still loving this fic Em, well done on these two new chapters.
In answer to your query, Evan's Mum is no longer alive. In Life of the Party, part 2, when Dylan died, Commander Jones mentioned that Dylan would be buried next to his mother, wher the COmmander himslef had always thought he'd be first, in the family plot. So I think that definitely confirms for you that she is no longer around.
It's funny, as a lotof us are a bit hazy on the Jones family history. it's so tiwsted and complicated and you don't know whose step sons and fathers are whose and how this person or that person died, and who killed them etc etc. Luckily, I do remember about Mrs Jones ;o)
Can't wait for the next bit...hurry up and write, I want to see some Tess! :o)
Em
2005-01-15
ch 11, anon.
abuseWhoo hoo, updates! Ah, how i love tess/jonesy...and jonesy's mum is dead...hope that doesn't mix any of your story up.
jakc
2004-12-17
ch 10,
abuseHmm... ilike it, But i thought tess was the one that was meant to be in hospital? and then Jonesy ends up in a hospital bed? I'm confused...but i love the story keep writing its great!
Brindabella
2004-12-16
ch 10,
abuseWow, explosive Emsta. Scared the fark out of me with chapter 9 haha, but it was a vital part of the story. Wil be glad to see your next chapter up, as who knows what will happen when the Commander enters the equation :) I just want Jonesy to make Tess listen when he talks, and that he succeeds in convincing her that she can trust him.
And yes, like I said, I can't wait for a new chapter to this, it's been a while since I have read it, and had to go back to re read some bits, lol. But well done on what you have done so far.
Tess & Jonesy writers are still out there I think, but they're hiding, but hey, you and me are still here. I am working on a T&J one right now, a Christmas one, and it will be up by Christmas fingers crossed :) So everyone hang on the edges of your seats for my T&J one! hahaha :D
Kat-Girl-1987
2004-12-15
ch 10,
abusevery good. I don't think you explained hoe Evan ended up in hospital, or if you did I missed it.
PJOluvva
2004-12-14
ch 9, anon.
abuseOkay. I'm the first ot admit I hate TEss Jonesy fics coz they mean elss PJO fics are being written but I actually really like this fic. (Trust me HUGE complement there) PLease write more soon.
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