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| XxbigT-N-LilGxX 2007-03-09 ch 3,  | abuseis eriol gay i dont have anything about it but the story confused me so yea or nea let me no |
| Avelyn Lauren 2003-10-08 ch 3, | abuse4 hours of exams? No wonder you have a bad set up when it comes to who is with whom at the moment. Gomen but you have a good story. I jsut don't like the fact that you have put Touya and Yukito together as a couple. I hope that you're not going in the same direction for eriol hiragizawa and the3 new kid. guys don't belong with guys and girls don't belong with girls. Eriol looks at Sakura as a daughter adn that is a good thing. He could look at the new kid as a son as well. he mihgt even know more than he lets on. anyways other than those two little facts everything is good. Arigato. |
| Wild Force Ranger 2003-10-04 ch 3, | abuseWow! I wanna know what happens next...laos more Kero and Yue, I really like those characters. Write more, 'Kay? |
| Emerald Phoenix524 2003-10-04 ch 3, anon. | abusewow...*is speechless*... What's going on between Eriol and Takumi? Who is Takumi?? Gah...you HAVE TO continue, and soon too... itsh sho gweat... The only thing to criticize about this is the verbs, be careful what tense they're in. Besides that, the story is wonderful which is quite rare; it seems like anyone w/the ability to type more than 5 words per minute writes here, whether they know how or not... |
| Satan's Advocate 2003-08-31 ch 2, | abusebeautifully typed. Please continue ne? ~Jaina |
| 10220345 2003-08-30 ch 2, | abuse*bow* *bow* Praise the Lord, Kelly-san updated! Nice introdution of the OC. I want to read more. *nodnod* and I do hope you update quicker than last time. *sweatdrop* Mi-chan ^.^ |
| Emerald Phoenix524 2003-07-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseMore, please!! Finally, a fic without fluff and romance. They are very rare these days. I can't wait for more, so please update as soon as possible. |
| Ashura Akuma 2003-07-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseErmm... I have only seen CardCaptor Sakura for only a few times so I got very little knowledge on its characters but this sure look like a very promising fic to me ...I am sure as things developed I will know who is who... So keeping updating... =D |
| 10220345 2003-06-03 ch 1, | abuseGah! One of my favorite authors of *all* time is writing a CCS fic! *is a big fan of your Yami no Matsuei and FAKE fics* I can tell it's gunna be great already! *heart* *heart* Continue, please! ^_^ But, of coures, you already knew that. |