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Reviews For: The Mist of Evil: The Heart of A Hero

hyliansage
2005-04-14
ch 8, anon.
abuseDraw! Draw! ^_^ More drawings! XD

The kids are all so cute! ^^ And the Shock Flip technique sounds so cool too! ^^ It sounds kinda like a martial arts move! ^_^

Yay! Magic! ^_^ I bet Zelda'll be a great teacher! XD

Dadi! You're not supposed to run off like that! You could get hurt! But Tito will rescue him, right? ^__^ And they could have some nice father-son bonding moments! XD

Update soon! K? ^^
hyliansage
2005-04-14
ch 7, anon.
abuse^_^ Remember me? XD

T_T Um... I hope you can forgive me for being so late... *cough*asusual*cough* T_T Homework's been horrible lately, and all those SATs and APs! T_T But now it's spring break and I'm gonna catch up on all the stuff I've delayed! ^^ (and hopefully write more. But i doubt it... *needs to go watch more of that tv mystery/drama series* XD)

*gasp* Ganondorf's coming back?! Aww... I feel so sorry for Arlace! *nudgenudge* You should draw your Zelda characters too! *winkwinknudgenudge* XD Evil Ganondork! XD *whacks him in the face with a Home-Run Bat* ^^;; I always thought the one male (almost wrote mail XD) in a 10 years thing was kinda weird... involving cross-species umm... "marriages" -__-' Soo... I like your take on it! ^__^ *clicks next chapter*
Ragade
2005-02-10
ch 8,
abuseAlso very good, but these chapters feel, short. Make them a little longer, just a bit. You know, give them a bit more length. Otherwise, glad to see your back in business...
Ragade
2005-02-10
ch 7,
abuseBeen a while since you've updated. I had worried you had left the story for dead. This brightened up my day a bit, seeing something almost forgoten repop up. This chapter feels, short... Well, it was still pretty good, but her son is half hyling (SP), who was the father...
Ragade
2004-09-27
ch 6,
abuseIN wisdom and old age (Who am I kidding, I am younger then most people), I have to say that this is quite an interesting story, and you are quite the interesting writer. I have tried to read every story you read, then agaim, I really don't have to try. The storyies are good, and the ideas keep me glued to my seat. One thing I pounder though. Do link and Zelda still wear the same clothes. I mean, Zelda would stand out in such fancy clothes, but what about Link... Owe, and I foresee furutre shipping among the children (In a chessy voice) but the seed of evil in one as well... :_:
Astral Zephyr
2003-08-09
ch 1,
abuseWow, this one looks promising. I'm reading this directly after Howler Moon (which was the bomb, by the way), so it's kinda a big step to future.
CassieOwls
2003-07-08
ch 5, anon.
abuseaw! poor tito. ya link and zelda! what happened 2 malon,saria and aaron and the story? great story!
CassieOwls
2003-07-08
ch 4, anon.
abusehehe tickle torture! I'm quite tickleish, but i don't get tickle tortures, i get The Claw. LOL great fic!
CassieOwls
2003-07-08
ch 3, anon.
abusethat's great! I love this fic, one of the best zelda fics i've read anyways, and i'm not just saying that!
Naya Zephronic
2003-06-25
ch 4,
abusesuch a sweet famaly, the famaily that most of us don't have and caome alive in fary tales...
Naya Zephronic
2003-06-07
ch 3,
abusewell i'm no Zelda expert eather but you can count on me caome back for seconds! ^_~
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