Good story. Good ending to DBZ (now you must remake DBGT lol) :D

Wow, that was awesome. I was a little apprehensive when I read the summary, but you definitely delivered. It WAS better than the DBZ official ending.

But me being the hardcore Vegeta fan, I thought he was a little OOC. Well fine up until the point where he called Goku "old friend". That was.. Well unusual. :)

Keep up the good work, it was an awesome fic.

Ugh... I just read the 26th volume of Dragonball Z, thinking that the canon ending would be different from the anime version. How could Goku just up and leave Chi Chi like that? I was so furious! Lucky I remembered your story, which not surprisingly eased my anger. I much preferred your conclusion to Toriyama's, and I love the creativity that you included in developing this fic. Excellent work, as always NansJns. You're a truly great writer! _

This is far better than the "real" ending of DBZ (which, while good, was rather lacking). Your fanfiction is amazing!

Wow, this WAS better then the original ending! I like Vegeta in this fic, Bra too!

you are an excellent author. I like your ending much better than the DBZ ending. Thanks for keeping me entertained.

YAY! ::hugs:: UR AWSOME! this fic is great! I LOVE IT! really cool, you should SO write a sequel!

Your ending was so much better than the real one! I think it was silly for Goku to just leave for ten years at the end of Z. Great work! I loved the way you brought romance into it to. Nothing much to complian about, except...darn it...i wish it was really like this in the series! WA!

Oh well, great work...keep it going!

This is a better ending than what Akira Toriyama gave us!

Nice Alt. Ending. Very satisfying.

That was cute! I've a question... does GT fit into this as well? I mean, it makes sense... Two years later, Uub's training is finished, so they go to Kami's Lookout for a rematch. Then all the events outfold. The only thing that wouldnt make sense would be how Pan became such a weakass... -.-; Ah well, I never liked GT Pan anyway.

ANyway, this is great! You're right! This IS how it should've ended! I didn't really see why Goku decided to up and leave his family for ten years to train some kid nobody's ever met before. That was just WAY odd...

I liked your ending much better than what was given at the end of the series! Bravo great ending! Kudos for putting it so nicely, you should try to make another DBZ or DBGT fic, I think you would be quite good at it!