 tuNGaw-GiRL 2009-10-19 . chapter 8you are updating, right? because i like this story so much...pls update.^_^ |
 Kit2000 2009-09-02 . chapter 8Hi there! I have just read your story and I was so intrigued! Your writing skills are awesome and the way of story-telling is just great! You keep everyone in character and it can't not to make us happy!
Thanks a lot for a wonderful story and please, update soon! We are waiting! |
 Ame Mika'zuki 2009-08-15 . chapter 8I love seeing this Sakuno and also this Ryoma! XD
when you find the time, please do update this!! |
 Hiei's Cute Girl 2009-08-09 . chapter 8And now, the thrilling conclusion! Please?
XD
I'm loving this! So realisting, so smexeh, and so absolutely breathtaking! Good luck on the makings of the next chapter! |
 The Sky Is Endless 2009-07-21 . chapter 8It's good good good good good.
Don't take three years please~ |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 8Dun dun dun.
LOL.
OMG.
That was amazing.
Although you left us with an evil cliffy.
Uwah.
Please finish it.
As you can see, there are atleast 500 of us who want to see how this story ends.
Love your characterizations and narrative techniques.
Keep up the good work! |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 7Don't rape her, Ryo-kun! |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 6OH GEEZ. RYOMA AND HIS IMPURE THOUGHTS XD |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 5Hahahahah.
Getting warmer. Yes xD |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 4OMG. I love the way you're narrating this story. |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 3LMAO.
Ryoma thought something else when he heard the words "I'm wet..." from Sakuno xD
Pervy, pervy, little kiddo. |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 2Nice take on Sakuno although I felt that her musings were a little repetitive.
But that could just be in her character... which is somewhat in contrast to Ryoma's organized, concise, and straight-to-the-point, musings. |
 iKiohri 2009-07-06 . chapter 1First of all. Bravo.
You captured Ryoma Echizen very well in this fic.
He's characterized very well.
The humorous sarcasm. The ironic words.
That's just Ryoma to me.
And the plot sounds like it is loyal to the cannon too.
It explains his initial feelings for Sakuno, which is, honestly and sadly... apathetic.
>_>
I do hope that he will soon recognize it though.
Come to think of it, I hope Sakuno appears in the new Prince of Tennis as well.
I hope they didn't just take her away just like that. |
 micchi sakura 2009-05-07 . chapter 8Micchi: AW that was awesome! I can't wait to read what happens next! Please update soon! |
 Wings of Fidelity 2009-05-05 . chapter 8Oh man, I can't get enough of this!
It's so adorably addictive. And Ryoma's acting really into character, I can just imagine him having a hard time subtly shoving his apologizing intent to Sakuno-chan. So cute!
Hope you could update soon. Seriously, you have to. I might not survive, the suspense is killing me, terribly and slowly -.-
Magnificent job by the way, keep it up :)
~ Wings of Fidelity ♥
P.S. Hurrah, another addition to Alerts and Faves! :does victory dance: |