 Derema Phoenixia 2005-06-05 . chapter 2Sorry I didn't review this sooner.
I realy liked "No, Aibou" the best but this one is VREY good. I Like it a lot. |
 dragon shadows 2004-12-16 . chapter 2you're right, no aibou was very powerful
and this not to the same extent
but it does balance it very nicely
to be sure i'm glad i have read them both
this is on my favourite stories list
shadows |
 b.l.w. 2004-11-29 . chapter 2 no offence but it sorta sucks.
no emailing me about this or anything. |
 Misti Wolan 2004-06-26 . chapter 1Guess who. (Well, there's no fun in that one. I signed in.)
It's… interesting. Not graphic—thank you!—but gets the point across tactfully. …I think I liked the first part better in that sense, though.
You should write more. A little description would help, but you're pretty good at phrasing the answers so they seem real and so the question asked is obvious.
;)
(I would've reviewed yesterday, but my web browser wasn't cooperating.) |
 nix 2003-08-10 . chapter 2 Good fic.
Samara: Both parts very powerful!
Sadako: With an original style!
Are you gonna do any more with differant POV's? Cos you're good but one thing, maybe you should try adding just a bit of description cos it was a bit confusing with just the thoughts in some places!
Well Sayonora for now!
Samara: Adios Amigos!
Sadako: Au, Revoir!
*Floats away on throne of Evil* |
 x Hearts 2003-08-04 . chapter 2^.^ ^.~ that was great! *two thumbs up* hehehe |
 Niki121488 2003-08-04 . chapter 2 This is original, good work. Poor Yami, he got raped. Normally, Yugi is the one that gets raped. When I compair both Yami's and Yugi's POVs, I get confused. Can write another chaper with both Yami's and Yugi's POV together? Please continue soon. |
 Esaema 2003-06-06 . chapter 1I like how you narrarated this fic. Very original (yes I mean that as a compliment) and captivating. Great Job! |
 Maruma-chan 2003-06-03 . chapter 1this is so sweet! i think it's more fluff, like romance or general, than angst though. i love it! |
 Rhelle 2003-06-03 . chapter 1Intriguing and certainly original. I haven';t seen something written in stream-of-conciousness since rayemars' "Cold". It was very nice, gave a very powerful siense of happening with the fewest possible words.
~Rhelle |
 Ziyal Rising 2003-06-03 . chapter 1Oh, I liked that. The way you wrote it makes the story interesting. |
 Rutu 2003-06-03 . chapter 1 No one's gonna flame you. That story was very, VERY good. I really liked it. I hope it wasn't a one-shot. Could you please write another chapter, maybe in Yugi's POV? Please continue this soon. |
 Blue September 2003-06-03 . chapter 1That was actaully very GOOD! I had my suspicions at first, but I wasn't really certain until those lat few lines. That's sad! It was really sad! |