O_O damn annoying aunt >_< Ok this is my fav chapter so far. So funny and love the way you have draco casually rubbing harry's shoulder. Oh you better call me you sting sosos I need to get this on my fav site so talk to me about. Now I wonder if you come back and re-view your own stuff to see if there are things you would change. It is what I do w/my own works, now reposting on ffnet I change so much and I hate my sentence, O_O as you know. I see you are more comfortable w/the style by this chap so everything is greatly improved. cant wait to read next chp.
*hugs&kisses*

O_O Yup still commenting dont know if you care, here is what jumpped out:
When you use a spell, you should {interpret it} for ex. its been years since I read the books or perhaps I like your story idea but never read a single HP book. That's the view you want to take w/spell charms as if the reader does not know what the heck they are doing. "come'" I dont know what happen to Blaise and whats this about him having his underware on his head. Need to reread. LoL nice and funny everyone wants to "jump them" now overall great writing style. Not going to repeat other comment, I just noticed you published 2003 so explains alot. {teehee} off to read more.

Ok you asked I give, *dont know when you asked* I always take that litterally so here is my review:

The start was confusing because I did not know where the trio were, so you may want to add that they are on the train.O_O.

Then it did happen you describe the insert char "person not mentioned in any of the books" Which is good however the acent he has was not described you may want to add. You know I am no expert, so think of it as the average person just commenting on things that jump out at me. I like your style more detail to thier surroundings would be great as a whole the chapter is wonderful. I will read the others a well. A couple of spelling errors the space between words were missing and "McGonagall" instead of "McGonical"

O_O I got issues and I dont know 'when' you did this, you may want to review and post on aairn for me *puppy eyes* XD well no yuri is allowed but the *hint* of a relationship is ok. Oh well, off to read more. *waves byeby*

hi, i just read your story and i really i love it
i hope you do a other one
i can't waith to see what
going to have been next time

Now, I just wanted you to know how much I love this story. It is just so HOT. I love your style of writing. Actually, I came across this story about two years ago. I have read it several times since then. I have also read your story, "Scent." I wish you would finish it, but I understand if you don't want to. I know that me, just one reviewer, cannot make you update "Scent" and write an epilogue for "Malfoy." I don't think you have nearly as many reviws as you deserve. Alot of less talented writers get 500 reviews for stories that just don't deserve that. I just wanted to let you know that I love your writing style and appreciate you as an author.

Keep writing and I'll keep reading!

Oh My God i loved it!
The plot was hard to follow at the beginning but you pulled it together.
If you really want to do the side stories of Nuccius and Ron then by all means go for it!!
I just have to ask what about Hollow?
I really liked that one. :-(
Oh well as i said i loved it and put the epilogue up soon please!

That was fuckin awesome and way to hot for me wow keep on writing

OK, again you have said they are 4th years. I know it is a writer's perogative, but generally Veela come into their "Inheritance" at the age of 16. ( As per JKR) 14 years old is too young to mate. They still would have 3 more years of school left AFTER 4th year. What happens if the mates are pregnant? The wizarding world is not nearly as liberal as the Secular world, they would frown upon 14 year olds getting married and having sex and children. And, NO, I am not some old fuddy duddy. I know enough and have SEEN enough to know that a child can't take care of a child.

OK, in the first Chapter you said they were 5th years, but they are 16? 16 would make them 6th years. Then in Chapter 6, you state that Harry is a 4th year. Then he'd be 14 and I'm quite sure none of them would be acting this way as 14 or even 15 year-olds. You also said in the first chapter that Nuccius was turning 16 the following day (they were on the Hogwarts Express, making the date September 1st), so I assumed that he had to start a year late because his B'Day fell a day short, That would make him the oldest of the bunch. If, however, he turned 16 and went into 6th year, the others would ALREADY be 16 and OLDER than Nuccius. So please clear this up. WHAT year are they in? REMEMBER, they leave for school on September 1st EVERY year and classe start the following day, unless the 1st is a Friday or Saturday. Then they have time to settle in and hang out.

good story! please do a epilogue soon!

awesome

You know, that was a really nice lemon scene... not too tacky at all...

aw im so sad that this story is coming to an end. T-T
hehe i started to read this story back in 2004 than lost it then found it again in 2005 /gah/ i didn't no about story alert till like newhy jan. of '06 enough random stuff...i REALLY REALLY liked ur story ^_^ hope u write another one soon

[[~*~]]_Mercury Black_[[~*~]]

Great story. Kept updating.

Please update as soon as possible, this story is really, and I mean really, good^_^...