Good stuff here. Not as depressing as the last chapter except for the end. I have a feeling you're going to keep this storygoing until Ginny dies which is an exelent idea. I will be patiently waiting for more.

im very interested in where u came up with the idea of zoanthropy, sounds like a guyver thing to me

Hum, is this part of the DDllf arc? Because it looks like it, with snape and luna and ginny and harry and...god what a nightmare :p

Man oh man is this depressing. But in a fun way. It's hard to explain. I hope you update soon and we here about tomas and jon's adventures. And was it really nesesarry to kill of Draco AND turn his mother into a zombie. Couldn't you have just picked one. Seriously.

I absolutely loved this chapter. I think you did an amazing job on it and I hope you update soon! Keep up the awesome work!

*gets all emotional*
This was so GOOD. The characters were great... poor Jon... I worry so much about Tomas. I worry about the future. And ...*whines* why can't Harry and Ginny just be together? *Sniffle/pout* Well, great job, can't wait to see the next chapter.
Have you ever been to phoenixsong.net? This story would do really well there- you would get a bunch of reviews, and everyone is really nice. Your story is excellent! I was so excited to see there was a new chapter...
Anyway, good luck with the next.
Rachel (Pooca)

Hmm, Ginny was followed by a cat. A Parseltongue song sounds so cool, very unique idea! I liked that Ginny was attached to the song too. Poor Jon! I felt so bad for him at Ollivander's. Tom's exact wand! I can't wait to find out what's going on with Tomas fainting. It looks like both he and Jon know more than they think they know. So Lucius has redeemed himself? I'd think if he hadn't, he'd be after Tomas. I enjoyed the lyrics at the end too.

From the "Hey, just thought you should know" department:
As a general rule, I don't like second-generation stuff... that's usually one strike.
I think H/G fits... and they aren't really an "item," persay. Two strikes.
You've got Slytherins and a couple of other irritating characters bouncing all over this fic. Three strikes.
But as I started to read, I gave you a chance. Why? Because everything is well written. By that, I mean you've used punctuation, spelling, grammar, and capitalization as they were meant to be used. For my money, that's one way to at least get me to the end of one chapter. I grudgingly gave you a click to the second one, then gave into your spell of words. ;)
You write quite well, and I'm looking forward to perusing through a couple of your other fics. I actually LIKE Draco in this one... he isn't an idiot who's switched allegiances, and he's not the evil, evil person he's "supposed" to be. I really like your Tom, but I think I actually like Jon better. This story has a lot of potential... I encourage you to continue with it. Just a preliminary guess, but perhaps there's something of a continuation in that other fic I read about in your profile (can't recall the title just now).
However, after reading your profile I can see why you're such a good writer... lots and lots of practice. ;) Keep with it, I like all the ways this fic could go. I also hope to see more mythical references.
Also really liked that Ginny's owl was called Cassiopeia... the constellation looks mysteriously like a... lightning bolt!
Keep up the good work.

Yeah, you write pretty good. I hate Harry/Ginny with a passion, but neverless you see me here reading it. I guess it's because they are apart that I can take it pretty well :P (I hate, hate, hate, Ginny!! *arg*)
I like little Tom, he is so cute! He is very innocent and naive, but also a smart boy. That's good. Pity he's gonna be gryffindor... *sigh*
About Harry... he's really mysterious. Having read your other fics, I can see some kind of connection here... Which makes me love this Harry more :D I loved the idea of the Slythering song, with parseltongue and all... I'd die to listen to it! (and learn the lyrics as well XD)
I can understand you when you said it was really difficult to write this chapter. The longer it took me to write a chapter to me was... uh... 3 months and a half. (Yeah, it took you longer, but my chapter was much lighter and not so long ^^U) Anyway, I like this story, but you know which are my favorites, so... is it wrong to ask for an update of those fics instead of this one? ^^;;
Oh, I'll be bugging you by e-mail so it's alright... ^^;;

I know it's hard to write a 4 year old. All children are hard to write. The way they talk, the words they use... it's difficult to come with them, and sometimes it's just easier to make them mentally older :P
I love your Tomas. He is so cute ^.^
I can't wait to see him in school.
Also, the bitter feelings everyone (who knows what happened) has, are very well written. You get your point accross, and I can practically cry for Ginny... even though I hate that character, and that Harry/Ginny is the ship I lest like (not at all).
Anyway, I love the way you are picturing Harry. All misterious, wise, and collected. I can't wait to see what he means by he'll be gone and won't come back... I don't think it'll just be death. It could be other stuff...
Will you give Tomas a snake? :D
I'd love to see it.
Keep writing! You are so good ^^

Luna's great. She's more mature here. Oh dear, Ginny'd better not give her rumor ideas about Harry! I like Harry's mature personality a lot too. I forgot Harry's class of 1998, so am I. Draco and Harry's banter is great. Remus made me sad... Hmm... you've been implying that Tom Riddle is related to Harry, it'll be interesting to see how that turns out. I hope poor Tomas gets a chance to determine his own future. Oh, I've read chapter 8 too, you must have done some editing in the middle when OOTP came out. I like Madam Malkin so much more now. Tomas is adorable, and you did a great job writing him.

Tomas is so cute. Maybe the lion toy will be a good influence. ;) Chapter 4 is so romantic. This looks like where my review got lost before. Shame on me for forgetting to read more! Must have been OOTP's fault! I can tell because you mention the Quibbler in Chapter 5.

Lovely introduction with the contrasts between the green eyes. Excellent metaphors throughout. Baby Tomas is so cute! My favorite line of chapter 1: "I'm still sane, relatively speaking." This is evil, but it's such a cool idea! Harry and Draco in a rock band reminds me of Lestat. Morsmorde? Very cool. Oh, no. It's really bad that people found out who the "father" is. Draco dancing around because his baby said "Quidditch" is a great mental image.

Hmm... I'm sure I read this before, but my review is gone. Well, I needed to look at the updates anyway!

*sigh*

love this series ... so interesting ... want more Harry though!

evil old ladies ...

k -- write more please! its so good!

Tomas is so cute. Can't wait for the next chapter!

By the way... Is Tomas going to have a lot of trouble with people bothering him about his father at school?