Reviews for A Fluffy Takari

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Ella 2008-05-28 ch 3, anon.	abusewhy did you put sora with tai. she totally belongs with matt! x-(
Ella 2008-05-28 ch 1, anon.	abusefluffiness! gotta be kidding me!
shadowpawz 2007-12-15 ch 11,	abusethis is the best story ever. please update.
The Illusionest 2007-08-01 ch 12,	abuseHehe this is cool please update this it will be so awesome to read some more of this story
digitalmonster911 2007-07-09 ch 12, anon.	abuseOkay, not to be mean but, if you don't hurry up with the next chapter and let T.K. save Kari, then she's probably gonna die from blood loss. We are all waiting! If you can't think of anything to write, remember this: people get sick of reading the same happy endings over and over again. They want something new. So don't go with the "and they lived happily ever after" thing. Go with something like, Kari's nearly out of it, T.K. arrives, she faints, he spots Leslea running toward him, she tries to convince him it wasn't her, Davis arrives, tells T.K. the truth, T.K. nearly kills Leslea, Davis helps to get her to T.K.'s apartment, Davis calls an ambulance, T.K. and Davis finally work together, Tai and others arrive and Tai nearly commits murder to Leslea(well, says he's gonna kill her, anyway), at hospital T.K. stays overnight with Tai or someone, Kari wakes up from a coma(I know, I seem to have more idea about this than you! LOL), has some confrontation with T.K., Sora convinces T.K. to tell Kari how he feels, and I've run out of ideas. ^-^ Ah well. Currently I'm writing my own fanfic that is mature. You strike me as a really good writer, so don't stop! You have great ideas and even though this was never expected, it became a story. You seem to have a lot of inspiration, and most importantly, YOU DON'T SPELL ANYTHING WRONG! Seriously, people hate it when they can't read the fanfic! Whatever you do, please continue because all your fans would be disappointed if you stopped and besides, it's getting really good! Just a hint. You're more likely to get flames the longer you wait. People get irritated easily. I'm with you all the way and hope you write more in the future, though I do know it gets tiring. P.S. I'm not criticising you at all. I love your work! P.P.S. I think S-Club 7 had it right when they said: "Don't stop, never give up, hold your head high and reach the top. Let the world see what you have got, Bring it all back to you." Listen to the song. It's called "Bring It All Back"
digitalmonster911 2007-07-04 ch 12, anon.	abuseI love it! You better continue the next chapter or I AM GOING TO KILL YOU! Seriously, there had better be a romantic "I love you" scene between T.K. and Kari. But make it more original than the "I've never realised till now that I love you and you're my best friend" thing. Something like, when he finds her, he runs over, she wakes up and he kisses her. And by the way-don't dwell on the Dawn/Tai thing. You'll lose readers. And don't make the next chapter the last. Make sure you clear everything up so there's no loose ends. There is nothing people hate more than things that aren't brought to attention and closed. I mean EVERYTHING. By the way, make sure T.K. yells at Leslea and STRANGLES her. If he won't, I will!
yAkArI-TaKaRi lUvEr 2007-06-01 ch 12,	abusefinish it please
puasluoma 2007-01-06 ch 11,	abuseplease update!
Yami Kamiya 2006-10-16 ch 12,	abuseNO! Too cute! I love it! WOW!! KEEP IT UP and even though I like Taiora that scene was awesome!
Melissa 2006-05-15 ch 12, anon.	abuseomg! this story is so good..im like reading trough it with like exitment! lol yea..well keep writting its so good give u lots of props on this story... much love, Melissa
Joanne 2005-10-25 ch 12, anon.	abuseLike your story.will u continue it?if it is ,it do be great when will chapter 13 be out?i am eager to read it
???????????????????????? 2005-10-08 ch 12, anon.	abuseAH! WHY DONT U PPL FINSIH UR STORIES! ITS SO FUSTRATING! (Plz finish this story. I just love digimon. Especially Takari!)
:o :) 2005-10-05 ch 12, anon.	abuseSo cool, please review soon please!!
XxIntoTheDarknessxX 2005-08-17 ch 12,	abusei no its been along time but i hope u update
puasluoma 2005-08-04 ch 12,	abuseSo cool please continue

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