this story is so cute!i hope that u'll write a sequel that they will tell each other theie feelings!but anyway tnx 4 the great fic! i love it!

oh! how sweet! but i think u should have another one. how they were able to confess to each othr finally.. ^^

Oh, interesting, they love each other, but think that the other loves another person... cool fic^^

Ah, the classic 'I like him/her but I don't think s/he likes me back.' Never fails.

*sighs blissfilly* Kawaii...that was a sweet poem...great job...just lovely *sighs again*
Godbless and good luck!^-^

Very sweet. Nicely written.

OMG! THIS WAS SO GOOD AND SO DEEP! I GIVE IT AN A+ TIMES INFINITY! YOU CAN ACTUALLY FEEL THE LONGING IN THE HEARTS OF THE CHARATCTERS! PLEASE O'GREAT AUTHOR! MAKE A SEQUEL WITH A HAPPY ENDING! A SAPPY MUSHY GUSHY FLUFFY PUFFY LOVEY DOVEY ENDING I MIGHT ADD! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! IF YOU MAKE A SEQUEL I SHALL BE FOREVER GRATEFUL!
-chibisakura

Two words...Cute, Poetic...Oh wait three words! You know the first two, and here's the third...CONTINUE! Plz write that sequel. Its really good so far. Making a happy ending will make it...Perfect~! ^_^ Sugar high...sorry. But still continue. I'm waiting. For the sequel and you to continue "the girl I want" Hehe...

Luv Luv and more luv...
~Shadowed Amethyst Dreams aka. Innocnt-Devil

Waii! This is very interesting! Please continue! *goes to review S+S one*