Hyne above, girl, you've got talent. I'm crying, you know. Then again, we both know I'm a sap. Still... this was beautiful, and the coupling was unexpected, but fully accepted and well-written.

Keep this up, baby girl. You've got a skill I can only occasionally touch.

Sincerest love,
Moriah

That scene took my breath away...I can't remember the last time a feeling was captured so brilliantly through dialogue and understated imagery. I actually guessed the pairing =I but that didn't - couldn't - ruin it. Perfect @-}--

That's a beautiful story, I was crying at the end. I tried as ahard as I could, but I couldn't guess the pairing until the very end. Very well written, so very Quistis