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| tash 2005-05-19 ch 1, anon. | abusehey i know that you probably put a lot of effort into writing this poem - yet this is not the genre for it to be in. Sure Traci Harding uses verse within her books, yet they are for some purpose, and after reading this I do not understand the relevence it has whatsoever to the first book of what i call one of the best sci-fi epics of all time! You do not mention any of the lead characters such as Tory, Maelgwyn/Miles, Calin/Brian, Katren/Naomi, Ione, Teirnan, or any of the other masters. Please ensure next time you post you post this into fictionpress and not mislead others |
| Vicous Pixie 2005-04-26 ch 1,  | abuselook, i really don't mind your poetry, but when it comes down to it, this really doesn't belong here. there is a site, which is an extension of fanfiction, for original fiction/poetry. I suggest you put your work on there, and you would recieve much better critique of your work, then all the poetry placed in obtuse sections of fanfiction. Can you please remove your poetry from here? because it disillusions fans of certain stories. if you do do as I ask, please let me know, so I can read your poetry where it belongs :D |
| cerasi1 2004-09-14 ch 1, | abuseWell, it is a good poem, for sure. But I honestly can't see the relevance to the book. Have you actually read it, or are you using it to post original work? I'll see where you're taking this... |
| not telling u 2004-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseoi its gd i've read the book but i don't understand wat ur poem or wat its about. yeah thats all i can think of so gd luck and continue. |