Um, yeah. You've gotten 66 reviews in two chapters. I doubt anything I say will be new, so instead I'll go with, "This story deserves at least that much recognition."

'Still twisting and turning, trying to catch the best angle in the mirror, Zoro said. "Makes me look fearsome."'

... *killed again* XD Ahahaha, best. Iunno, that one made me laugh.

o-o And this entire thing was like, omg. XD The imagery! Agh, so cool.

XDD That rocked. I absolutely love the idea of those two playing such an odd little game. And I know that game, it just never even crossed my mind in the realms of ficdom. Why NOT, I don't know. XD Seems obvious now... They'd both kick ** at it.

... And strangely I wasn't grossed out by the thought of bloody potatoes. Wut.. o_o

One note, you misspelled fearsome as fiersome. I'm assuming you mixed it up- with fierce, so no worries, just threw me a bit as all, because fierce is a word I can definitely not imagine zoro using.

Wow! Just ... wow! I love this! You are undeniably amazing! Zoro and Sanji here are wonderfully perfect. I can't even find any words to describe my awe and joy at this masterpiece. I just love the way those two banter back and forth with each other, showing how perceptive they are with the other, gaining a better understanding with each other. It was interesting to see why Zoro doesn't trust Nami or women in general and also, that Sanji actually has little experience with women to act the way he does. The entire tattoo scene was really incredible and it pointed out that Zoro actually does trust Sanji a lot to put the tattoo on him - or he could just be stupid. :P

This is very interesting. I liked how you got Zoro and Sanji right down to their characters, their rivalry with each other and their interactions. Because there is always more to them than just their bickering. I don't know why but I especially enjoyed the part with Zoro goading Nami. It was just like him to do something like that, only to escape to the kitchen to flee from Nami's wrath. I can just imagine Zoro chopping and hacking those poor potatoes away, even though he was slightly drunk. ^^ I got a laugh at the potatoes being spiced up with swordsman-flavor. I bet that would certainly taste delicious.

yeah, you wrote that "commentary is greetly appreciated", so here I go: than you for a great fanfic. I'm a bit tired of all the fics that allways concentrate on Zoro 'n Sanji fighting, thank you very much. Especially that tatto-part was gReaT! :)

I can't find a single thing wrong with this because it's GOLD. You totally rock; thank you for putting a little well-characterized Zorro/Sanji in the world!

This is great and wonderful and full of win, except for one thing and that is that you absolutely MOLEST the semicolon. I think that every single place you used it, it was incorrect and a comma would have been right. Not many people seem to understand semicolons and so a lot of people tend to use them in places where they're unnecessary. Because I am unfortunately compulsive about such things, that interupts the flow of the story for me.
Otherwise this was funny and delightful and perfect. :D Great characterizations.

This is a really well paced and well written story. Good creative use of words. I enjoyed it from start to finish. Keep on writing. That is all.

Man. Such a manly friendship. I love it! And they're both straight! Your Zoro w/women logic was greatly written! :) *faves*

~Pen~

"Yeah. Now you just need to go into battle with Mihawk back first." Ahaha, I laughed out loud at that.

I don't know where this story is going (or...was supposed to be going), and that intrigues me.

I really enjoy the realistic character interactions between Zoro and Sanji, though I guess it would technically be OOC how sensitive and insightful they are towards each other.

I thought the dialogue was witty and entertaining.

Thanks for this. =)

The writing is clever and smooth, dialogue is witty and everyone is pretty much in character.

Oh this is kewl!

OMG I love the story were Sanji gives Zoro the tatoo, first I was edgy thinking it was gonna be another damn yaoi story, but it was just kinda a friendship one. It was awesome, they were pretty in character, or i thought so.