XD It's getting to the point we're pointing out that we have bad words in each other's stories and we have mild ratings, ne? I'm going to point out you said Bitch (in reference to Lady Kayura) and the rating is G. But you're the autor; your call.

At the beginning its a bit confusing. It kind of jumps until Anubis has his dream. But I do like the idea of Dais trying to get Anubis back as a warlord. It would be neat if you worked on perhaps another part of this story- or you can leave us hanging with our own imaginations on how Dais is going to get Anubis back.

Great plot idea and good grammar. Props my dear.

OMG! That is soo great! I love it! MUST ADD!

PS- let anymouse sign it!

Dias, YOU *$#*#(#*! When are you going to realize that Anubis made the right choice? You let your heart (Such as it is) rule your thinking and fighting. If you would use your head, you would realize that Talpa was manipulating all of you. Anubis got out before things got bad.