 Earthian Angel 2008-08-10 . chapter 13i was looking to see if you updated and you haven't i was wonder if you going to ever continue this really really cute story. |
 riana rox 2008-01-15 . chapter 13UPDATE |
 ashlynne 2007-03-07 . chapter 13 I really like your stories! I hope you update soon, the last was 3 years ago for this story. Hope you haven't quit writing, I think you are very good. |
 WCInsane 2006-08-27 . chapter 13well I hope this review can get more chapter up soon. |
 cherry fantasy 2006-05-29 . chapter 13This fic is so cute, I love it ! ^-^ You just HAVE to update ! ^_^ |
 Dragonborncrystal 2006-05-26 . chapter 13This is good. Are you going to update anytime soon? |
 Kate 2006-04-25 . chapter 13 What is the likelihood that you will ever update this story? |
 tyleet88 2006-03-28 . chapter 13lol this is really cute you should keep this going...it good..plz update this |
 Christine 2006-03-21 . chapter 13 Wow! I'm totaly jealous of your writing skills. I mean damn this is a great story I wish you would put out the next chapter soon. I HAVE ALSO READ TWO OTHER STORIES OF YOURS and so far I like them all. Please update soon. I can't wait to find out what happens next. |
 Saturnine Succubus 2006-03-12 . chapter 1I think your story is promising, but I believe that it would benefit you to acquire a beta. Your grammar is not the best it could be. I don't mean to offend, but it's really difficult to read your story when you have no space between words and punctuation marks. (You also misused a few words, but that's not so bad in the grand scheme of things.) I would really like to read your story, but as it is it is too much trouble trying to understand it due to the formatting. Please look into a beta. Your story has a lot of potential and it's a shame that many people will probably pass over it due to such a trivial thing as spacing problems! |
 2005-01-04 . chapter 13 oh my ! So damn good ! keep up the good work ! mpreg rules ! i love your storie ! hope you update sonn ! |
 Serena 2004-12-23 . chapter 13 I love this fic. Please update soon, you haven't in a very long time. If you aren't going to update or I can find the next chapters on another website please e-mail me the site. |
 Serena 2004-10-04 . chapter 13 Update soon please I have been waiting a long time. |
 Kitty Kat 0303 2004-08-16 . chapter 13 I love this story and i think the plot's quite origional! Plez excuse my crap spelling and pretty plez upadte soon! |
 SouriMaxwellYuy068 2004-08-04 . chapter 13I really love all your stories especially this one it the last one I read (well except for the Yu-Yu Hakushow one but I am going to read that one next). Well anyways this story is really great so can you please update soon? :( I would really appreciate it thankx. |