nice fic... you know, a great one, even. my compliments on the knowladge of Sindarin... i only rearly use Quenya, and only usinf my dictionary... after reading your story, i have this Elvish feeling of purity and... i dunno, but i can imagine everything in it's Elvish beauty... it's very nice... btw, your site is very professional... i swear to Elbereth, you are one who deserves being of Elf-kind

Oh! MY ! GOSH! I need more! you are very good at this!More! In the name of Aragorn, please write more!

blink...blink...

WHOA!

i...uh...whoa...

this is getting..really...really...GOOD...

her mother...! i...goddamnit rayvin...you're amazing!

finish this one for me!

WHOA!

this is SO freakin cute! i want my eldar! well...i think john is my eldar, you know about john. this is such a good chapter.

THE FELLOWSHIP IS COMING!

such ominous words...

excuse my french, but this is fucking gorgeous!

savina!

yay! she's getting to hang out with haldir! do i smell love in the air?

i like this chapter. her confusion is reasonable. but why did she get point ears...this is so...magical...hahaha.

this is a kick ass beginning. kick ass. kick ass. kick ass. i love it so far.

Uh Oh!I don't like your discription of this Dream ElfLuthien,Galadriel and Arwen where said to be the most beautiful elves who ever of course being the most beautiful,the whole of Arda whent into mourning when she I assume would be second only because she was said to be Luthien Tinuviel reincarnated,then I guess it would be Galadriel.I tell you this because if you say something like this...that this mystery Elf from nowhere is more beautiful than Galadriel,and may be Luthien re-embodied then you'll get a whole lot of Tolkien purists in here flaming fact Luthien and Beren only had one child,Dior(Thingol's heir),who married of course had Elwing who married Earendil and they had Elros and Elrond...sorry for the small Silmarillion history there but you better not go messing with the history of ME,it make a few people me actually (Despite what you may think after reading all this),for although there are some things I don't like to see being messed 's lot's thats I just don't care that much about...its like eh...

Oh Goddess,let me guess...Mom's the Elf,so daddy must be human?And what's up with the temper tantrum...I have absolutly no love for my father but thats exactly what I show to others...nothing,no you throw a fit like that it usually means you care.

Good job,I do like it despite what you may think reading my reviews...I'm just trying to point out mistake's so you can rectify trying to be objective is please don't take them as flames for I truly and honestly don't mean them as soon,I'll be waiting

Namarie

Aislin

Yes but Middle-earth isn't based on good Professor said it was more based on England and ancient of ancient England alone or even Ireland alone.

Good chapter...whole mirror thing was a bit at the end is she going home?Because you've made it clear she does want at the end of this chapter you had her thinking that her and Haldir would have a you simply cannot send Haldir into our probebly die of grief since there are few trees lots of polution and absolutly no other Elves.

Good chapter 'cept for the confusion.

Namarie

Aislin

"Okay...lost now," Yep...thats me too.

Man oops.A tiny slip of the tongue and suddenly you have a confused and somwhat angry elf lord on your case.

Okay so your going to explain all this right?right?Cause the way she's acting and hiding stuff from them its not just because she has read the books,I mean it doesn't seem that way its not like you have to be all fearfull and hide your whole past JUST because you've read the books.

Namarie

Aislin

So far I have to say I liked this chapter the best so nice to see it from someone else's POV.I also see you copied a lot from the books on this to worry I did that as well when the fellowship entered Lorien in my story,only I 'borrowed' from the books AND the movie just to mix it up a little I liked the books better on this part anyway.

Namarie

Aislin

Okay,good was a bit short and moved a little too fast,but hey,thats okay.

I might even catch up to the newest chapter today...*Crosses fingers*I hope.

Namarie

Aislin

Hey. This was a very good chapter. I think that you have developed Taryn character very well. Update soon!

Star of the South

Uh...did Haldir just call her 'Melamin?'Cause that mean 'my love'in quenya...and um,he just met her...would it be slightly more apropriate for him to call her Mellonamin?Which is of course 'my friend'.

O,so she meets the fellowship too huh?Cool,but please no Legomance...its way to are good though,one can never have too many friends.

Good chapter,loved yes now I must go.I will (Hopefully)have time to read some so far so good.I like it,you did a bit of a time skip there but I'm guessing it was needed?Trust me I know how that feels.

Namarie

Aislin