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| HADmatter 2007-10-13 ch 1, | abusehehehe... yay Neville. I love him... and now I love this pairing. |
| Kymaera 2005-02-14 ch 1, anon. | abuseWouldn't let me review signed in for some reason. ::shrugs:: One word: cute! Insightful and constructive criticsm: got a little confusing as to who was saying what around the point when you talked about Seamus and the twins. Praise: Rae-chan, I love your writing! I've missed talking to you, study abroad just isn't the same without chatting with you. |
| Chainlinks 2004-12-11 ch 1, | abuseWow! You had me so wrapped up in the story that I didn't notice how close the scroll bar was to the bottom of the page. That last line caught me completely off guard and made me laugh out loud. Brilliant! |
| Lactuca 2004-12-04 ch 1, | abuseApart from occasional difficulty I had remembering who was speaking (which is mainly a reflection on me, I think…) I really enjoyed that. Very nice and quiet and understated. Neville and Harry were both perfect. But all in all, Harry probably ends up losing just as many points as Neville. Then again, Harry makes them up in Quidditch and saving the world, so there’s more of a balance. |
| C.Y.Myers 2004-10-01 ch 1, | abusee-hee!!^-^ CUTE!! that was great and funny and cute and i loved it and i totally see their pov's on 'people seeing the kids parents not the kids'!! i really like your writing and you are so OBVIOUSLY talented!!~ |
| Kymaera 2004-07-09 ch 1, | abuseRae-chan, this was adorable. I really, really liked it, but you know they're one of my favorite AU couples. Anyway. Wish there had been more, but it was good the way it was, too. |
| Every Now And Then 2004-05-15 ch 1, | abuseWow and aw were the first words to pop in my brown fluffy head when I finished this. Neville is such a darling. |
| Limonada1 2003-08-02 ch 1, | abuseAw! Very, very cute. |
| maderr 2003-06-30 ch 1, anon. | abuseI've yet to read anything of yours I don't like, but I have to say I'm duly impressed that you wrote a convincing harry/neville (not that YOU did it per se, but that it could be done). |
| cattail prophetess 2003-06-30 ch 1, | abuseAw... the end seemed kinda abrupt, but still nice. Poor Harry. |
| Suzine (Way too lazy to log... 2003-06-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseOh, how cute! And quite naughty, too...Harry's naked bum, eh? Your Neville's simply adorable. Good story. |
| Goddess Shinigami 2003-06-05 ch 1, | abuseAww. . *smiles* very cute. I've never read a Neville Harry fic, but I have to say it's very cute. *smiles* Keep up the good work! |