 FredandGeorgetwinsoftheC.O.C.A 2008-02-03 . chapter 9Wow. You seriously deserve an award or something. I cried again. How the hell did you do it? Oh yeah, I forgot to mention in the first one, but it applies to both...I really love the innocence of the youth and how the kids just show this unconditional love and adoration for their fathers...That in itself nearly had me crying for half of Dreams Before Yesterday. I hate Sora. So much. And, wow this is a total shocker, I wanna hug Riku! (the dead one...which makes it even more OOC for me...) I honestly never thought I would so much as think that sentence. I really can't say everything that I think, merely because I'm literally speechless from this point out. |
 Arexia 2006-06-24 . chapter 9 Both this fic and Dreams Before Yesterday are...wow. Wonderful stories. Sad as heck, but still wonderful. Keep it up! |
 Riku's Only Gurl 2004-10-26 . chapter 8 that's deep |
 Riku's Only Gurl 2004-10-26 . chapter 5 YEA!this chapter rocked!it was the best yet!i also blame sora for Riku's death!take that Bastard!(sora) |
 dnangelsora 2004-07-30 . chapter 9Beautiful! God, i love how this story flows. I can't wait to read the rest of your fics! I especially loved how that song braided in between the story, i really felt the drama. Thanks for the great fic. Ne?
Liz |
 JillyBean3 2004-01-21 . chapter 9ooh *sniffle* my *sniffle* goodness! *sniffle, sob sob* i love *sniffle* this story! hnny you are a *sniffle* great great great writer! LOVE it! |
 daea 2003-12-16 . chapter 1Hehe,
Just gonna give this review to ya so that it'll have 100. I was looking at it and noticed that it only had 99, and...that could be annoying, ne?
No, I'm only kidding, but just for the heck of it, I'll give ya one more. ^_~ |
 Andiavas 2003-11-27 . chapter 1aww...I'm beginning to like this story ^_^ hehe, I'll read more later! |
 daea 2003-11-05 . chapter 9Man, how do you do that?!
Your decriptions of emotions are truly amazing! You're so good!
Both of these stories featuring Nadia made me cry my eyes out. When I first read them, I wasn't a member of FF.net, and I didn't know how to review, so I'm doing it now since such wonderful stories deserve to be commented on...
I don't know how you do it, because no matter how hard I try, I just can't make characters seem that realistic, that much like us...Awesome!
I love the way you actually made me feel for the characters like that. You made it so life-like, like I said before(in other words), and you are really very talented in delving deep into the mind of someone. Man, I envy you...LOL. I'm only kidding, but really, I do wish I knew how to do that.
The whole thing with naming the baby after Riku and all that was just awesome. I liked Riku(he was my favorite character in the game), and you only made me like him more with the way you portrayed him in "Dreams Before Yesterday". So yeah, when he died at the end...I cried...A lot, LOL. I wouldn't say you made him out of character at all, but to see him all grown up and as a father just made him totally lovable, I think. The relationship he had with his daughter was so sweet.
And Nadia. Just...great character. She was adorable in your first fiction, and in this one you only made her all the more better by having her in that position, and at the end I completely fell in love with the girl. She was awesome. I've never seen somebody on this site create a character that was as likeable and able to relate to as that, so congratulations!
Well, there you have it. I totally loved these two fictions, and I'm currently reading "Codename: Kokosei", which is also amazing. I can't tell you enough how good I think you are, simply wonderful...
Take care!
~RainWarriorPrincess |
 Shinimegami Sky 2003-07-22 . chapter 9Finally finished it. Twas very very good. A very talented writer, that you are, lol. I still just wish Riku hadn't died. It was so sad. But it made the story good. I look forward to your next one...as long as there aren't any deaths, heh heh. Your fic kept making me think about my dad, bringing back a lot of memory's. But still I look forward to your next one. Keep it up! ~*~Sky |
 lara 2003-07-21 . chapter 1 I think it was fine and is a great begining for the 2nd of a great story |
 Shinimegami Sky 2003-07-16 . chapter 5Very good. As I have said you write well. Sorry to say I do not know anything of FFVI or this Edgar Figaro. Though he sounds like quite the character, lol. I'm liking the whole relationship between Sora and Nadia so far. Keep it up. ~*~ Sky ~*~ |
 Ari Powwel 2003-07-11 . chapter 9Aw . . . I read both Dreams Before Yesterday and Life is But a Dream today . . . so sad. I seriously cried when Riku died, I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU KILLED HIM!! **note I almost stopped reading there, just for that**
Then I read this . . . and cried when they named the baby Riku . . . I still don't like that, just for the simple reason that it's Sora and Kairi's baby, and there's only one Riku!! And there shouldn't be another. **sniffles** And I'm typing this and crying . . . gah I hate you now ^_^ I was crying the entire time I was reading Life is But a Dream because you killed Riku!! My family probably thinks I'm insane. Well, I am . . . so that's alright.
BUT YOU KILLED RIKU . . . **starts bawling again** **runs off to find her Riku-kun**
Ari |
 _|AeRiS|_ 2003-07-08 . chapter 9 all i can say is that i just loved it and you're really good. keep working like that |
 Matsudapie 2003-07-06 . chapter 9O.O
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It's over. Wow. Okay, you are a muse. Get away, other reviewers *truly insane laugh*! I absolutely adore your writing. It's so... beautiful. Damn, are you gifted! Well, when your new KH fic comes out I'll be one of the first ones reading it, and HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY! |
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