   Yonaka Takai
2005-07-30 . chapter 2Great story! |
Kira girl of anime
2004-11-02 . chapter 2cool chapter update soon please ^_^ |
Jupiter's Light
2004-03-27 . chapter 2Cool! Post more soon! :) |
Shinigami Gotenks
2004-02-03 . chapter 2Cool fic. Please update! R&R my fics too! |
Chimmoku
2003-10-19 . chapter 2 oh man dude, that fic was awsume! Write more you should! |
Shinigami Gotenks
2003-10-16 . chapter 2Awesome fic. Please R&R my fic! |
Shinigami Gotenks
2003-09-01 . chapter 1Great story! Update ASAP! |
The Girl Who Cried Oro
2003-08-23 . chapter 1nice. but just to let you know, its spelled 'battousai' not 'batosai'. just to let you know. update soon! ^_^ |
ShadowLi19
2003-07-11 . chapter 1interesting. ^^ |
blahblah
2003-06-30 . chapter 1 interesting. ^^ |
 Gosen the Saiya-Jin
2003-06-30 . chapter 1NICE START, PLZ CONTINUE BUT PUT A LIL' MORE DIALOGUE ^_^
Ja Ne |
dude
2003-06-06 . chapter 1 its cool |
imevil!
2003-06-06 . chapter 1 Ok first off Im just gonna say this story sucks...no offense! only because this story 'is suppose to' take place in like the 1600's and plus...avril is a poser, stupid pop punk person. oh and uh no offense again! |
blubelle
2003-06-06 . chapter 1Hey nice start, keep going. i like your story so far. I have to ask though, does Sierra know Japanese? It might be a good thing since she will most likely be going there. Whew, anyway keep up the good work and update soon!
-Kelly |
iggy4
2003-06-06 . chapter 1write more please. no actually you have to! |
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