Reviews for The Mutation
mcgurrin 5/9/06 . chapter 20
i like it
Pyrotic 12/6/04 . chapter 20
Aww... it's over? *pout* Well, it was a good ending. Yes, Ling is a bit MarySue-ish, but *shrugs* it was your first story. *grumbles* MY first story is writer's-blocked. And it's a rather typical fanfiction. _ So, good job!

-Pyrotic

'I thought my legs had turned to wood' -Mr. Feathering-Walthamstone
Obiwanfan 12/4/04 . chapter 20
a great ending to a great story. Perhaps a sequal coming on? Yes, no? Either was, this was a great story, i'll be watching for another story from you soon.
preciousbabyblue 7/20/04 . chapter 19
wow great story and i can't wait to read more.
sunnysfunny 2/15/04 . chapter 19
Nice ending to the chapter...update soon
x2lover 1/19/04 . chapter 19
UPDATE PLEASE!I LOVE IT!
highlitergrl 12/21/03 . chapter 19
yipee! yayaya! an update! *dances* great part! i love it! FINISH SOON!
highlitergrl 12/21/03 . chapter 19
yipee! yayaya! an update! *dances* great part! i love it! FINISH SOON!
Obiwanfan 12/21/03 . chapter 19
"Yes Ling, i am your father!" sorry, just kidding anyway. So this is going to be interesting...a good fight i hope...don't kill pyro either.
Obiwanfan 12/21/03 . chapter 19
"Yes Ling, i am your father!" sorry, just kidding anyway. So this is going to be interesting...a good fight i hope...don't kill pyro either.
Pyrotic 12/20/03 . chapter 19
Oh. Jeez. That's cool. *awed silence* Okay, enough of that. UPDATE! Not a cliffhanger! Help! I like the John being afraid of water thing. As you can tell, you've read my story, right? Hehehe. Yep, I'm a nut. Anywho, great job, and keep it up!
laura mulwray 11/8/03 . chapter 18
interessting now let me know what will happen
Starkeeper 11/8/03 . chapter 18
That was so good! you have to update as soon as you can! I want to know what happened to JOHN! AHH! i have to no! WA! lol

Sarah
Obiwanfan 11/8/03 . chapter 18
Good chapter, what's gonna happen now? i hope it's as suspensful as this one was. Good chapter, more soon please!
Sethoz 11/8/03 . chapter 18
NO! *screams, falls to her knees.*

How could you just leave it there? How! Very good part, wonder where John and Rogue are. Oh well, hope the adults get caught and the teens save them.

Please, please add the next part soon!

Sethoz
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