| Reviews for The Mutation |
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mcgurrin 5/9/06 . chapter 20i like it |
Pyrotic 12/6/04 . chapter 20Aww... it's over? *pout* Well, it was a good ending. Yes, Ling is a bit MarySue-ish, but *shrugs* it was your first story. *grumbles* MY first story is writer's-blocked. And it's a rather typical fanfiction. _ So, good job! -Pyrotic 'I thought my legs had turned to wood' -Mr. Feathering-Walthamstone |
Obiwanfan 12/4/04 . chapter 20 a great ending to a great story. Perhaps a sequal coming on? Yes, no? Either was, this was a great story, i'll be watching for another story from you soon. |
preciousbabyblue 7/20/04 . chapter 19wow great story and i can't wait to read more. |
sunnysfunny 2/15/04 . chapter 19Nice ending to the chapter...update soon |
x2lover 1/19/04 . chapter 19 UPDATE PLEASE!I LOVE IT! |
highlitergrl 12/21/03 . chapter 19 yipee! yayaya! an update! *dances* great part! i love it! FINISH SOON! |
highlitergrl 12/21/03 . chapter 19 yipee! yayaya! an update! *dances* great part! i love it! FINISH SOON! |
Obiwanfan 12/21/03 . chapter 19 "Yes Ling, i am your father!" sorry, just kidding anyway. So this is going to be interesting...a good fight i hope...don't kill pyro either. |
Obiwanfan 12/21/03 . chapter 19 "Yes Ling, i am your father!" sorry, just kidding anyway. So this is going to be interesting...a good fight i hope...don't kill pyro either. |
Pyrotic 12/20/03 . chapter 19Oh. Jeez. That's cool. *awed silence* Okay, enough of that. UPDATE! Not a cliffhanger! Help! I like the John being afraid of water thing. As you can tell, you've read my story, right? Hehehe. Yep, I'm a nut. Anywho, great job, and keep it up! |
laura mulwray 11/8/03 . chapter 18interessting now let me know what will happen |
Starkeeper 11/8/03 . chapter 18 That was so good! you have to update as soon as you can! I want to know what happened to JOHN! AHH! i have to no! WA! lol Sarah |
Obiwanfan 11/8/03 . chapter 18Good chapter, what's gonna happen now? i hope it's as suspensful as this one was. Good chapter, more soon please! |
Sethoz 11/8/03 . chapter 18NO! *screams, falls to her knees.* How could you just leave it there? How! Very good part, wonder where John and Rogue are. Oh well, hope the adults get caught and the teens save them. Please, please add the next part soon! Sethoz |