*gulp*

Well...I'm madly in love w/ Dilandau, but I'm not sure whose side I'm on anymore!

vidis da smo sad na kavi ja ne bih mogla pisati ovaj R (citaj: mali "podsjetnik"), jer jos nisam naucila bilokaciju (naglasavam JOS), a onda te ni kava nece moci spasiti :)
pisi... ili cu objaviti Tvoju kucnu adresu kako bi neki manijak mogao doci i natjerati Te da napises iduce poglavlje (salim se, mozda :))

You absoloutely HAVE to continue this!! Please! I love this fic as much as the first one!

Great chapter!! I like your fics coz Ryuu is actually a decent female character, :) Oh I sense a fight between the two boys for Ryuu, hehe.

Yay! A sequel! I'm sorry I didn't see this up before since I promised I'd review EVERY chapter if you made a sequel :) Great start! Now I just gotta read the rest!

This is great! I was hoping you'd make a sequal to Prisoners. It's really good, so please keep writing!

trebala mi je cijela vjecnost da dodem do 3 ch, glupi, glupi Demien...
go Miguel :) konacno mu se suprostavio! ova prica ce biti jako zanimljiva :)
a sto se mog D-a tice, pa recimo da je jako brzo postao "onaj stari"...
definitivno najdraza recenica: "However, she had to smile inside- if she decides to ditch them, they're screwed. svida mi se, jako mi se svida ;>

Ryuu is back :)) nemas pojma kako mi je drago sto si konacno pocela ponovo pisati (bilo je i vrijeme :)) sto reci, moram te sto vise nahvaliti kako bi se 5/20 takoder uskoro promijenilo...
salu na stranu, jako dobro poglavlje, istina Miguel me malo izivcirao sa svojim tipicno za tipove glupim ponasanjem, ali Boze moj, to samo pokazuje kako si dobro upoznala "neprijatelja" :) na trenutak mi je bilo zao mog prijatelja D-a, ali samo na trenutak, jer je on jednostavno tip koji i kad je u totalnom k... ne izaziva sazaljenje... ne znam, ima nesto u njemu
a sad na ch 3

Wow! That was fast! ^_^ yay! No, I don't have a camera in your room. ^_^ Heh heh.
Okay, I'm going to review as I read again!
Oh my. Dilandau is mad. You know, he's rather annoying in this version. O_o I hope he shapes up a bit.
OMG, Migel was actually reaching for his sword? Would Migel really kill Dilandau? O_o
Sorrow? Aw! Okay, I feel bad for him. He's acting kinda...schizo in a way. two people at once...and not Serena-like. Heh. Interesting...
O_O Bad move, Migel. O_o -_-;
O_O Wow! Migel actually went for his katana! O_O Oi. This is definitely not good.

""Alright, I'm calm" - he inhaled and exhaled deeply while running a nervous fingers through silvery locks, letting them fall back and assuring once again - "I'm calm"."

For some reason I just love that line. I dunno why...I just do. ^_^

"one intention clearly written all over his face" Migel does want to kill Dilandau, doesn't he? not loyal at all anymore. *chuckles*

" Secretly, in his wildest dreams he even dared to dream of love." Aw! Poor Dilandau! So...Dilandau is still in the army, isn't he? He didn't desert...no. It would be good for him, though. ^_^ Come on, Dilandau!
Oh, not good. "Migel has got to go". Ack. O_O
Hmm. Temporary truce. This should be god. ^_^ Keep writing more! I love it!

Girl I had almost forgotten about this story. I had to go back and reread everything. You are not allowed to take thay long to update this story again lol. So...is Ryuu going to welcome Dilandau or try to make him get lost? And how is Miguel going to take to his presence and learning about what happened to his fellow Dragonslayers? I'm so excited, you must update soon lol. Take care!

Heck yes you should keep writing this story! *waves her hand in the air* See! Feye is here! ^_^ I'm going to review as I read, so random comments be crowned.
Ah, poor Migel's got the wrong idea doesn't he? Hmm. This could get ugly. O_O
Migel. Shut up and let her explain. -_-
*sighs* Guys can be so thick sometimes. So...interesting. Migel's deserted, and Dilandau's in the inn. This could be oh-so-not-pretty when the two meet up. O_o
Aw! Poor Dilandau's all alone! *sniff* Nowl the questions is, will I still feel bad for him by the end of the chapter?
Oh my. Confrontation. Not good. O_o
Cliffhanger! No! Shrike...write more...please?

O! PEASE CONTINUE! THIS IS GOOD SO FAR?! Is the person that found Dilandau Ryuu?! I bet you any money it is her! Well, not any money... *emptys pockets* I'm out of money... sorry... -_-;; *sweatdrop*

Well, did the Dragon Slayers get killed yet?! Pelase tell me no! Youc an't kill the Dragon Slayers! Poor Dilly would be all alone! *hugs Dragon Slayers* Oh well, so far, this has been a good 1st chapter!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I wanna know what happens! Well, Ja Matta Ne!!



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PEACE OUT Y'ALL!! ^-^v!!

*in total awe* wo, i don't now what to say...AWSOME!
~VDG~

Alright your Evilness you are going to have to update this story soon, or I will be coming to find you. What an interesting portrayal of the characters. I'm loving it, Dilandau is cracking me up. That scene with Gatty in his room readijg that message from Folken..haha! That whole time I was thinking, damn if I was Gatty I would have thrown that scroll in the room and ran as fast as my feet could carry me. Well, update soon, take care!

Ya finally part 2 cant wait for the next chapter^^