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| randomperson 2007-12-26 ch 1, anon. | abusethe plot's a little bit confusing...what's the main conflict in this story? maybe this will become clearer as more chapters are added (hint hint PLEASE update!) Stuff I really like: the naming (very creative!), friction betwen arion and caelys, though I wish you could explain why arion is the way he is. |
| Theducksrcoming 2007-09-23 ch 7,  | abuseAwesome, can't wait to find out what happens in the next chapter. |
| MiracleBabe 2007-02-28 ch 2, | abusegdgd |
| orion 2007-02-27 ch 7, anon. | abuseI am the real Orion, sexy and hot and blue eyed..my number is 248.765-5345, your story has weekened my knees and i would like to meet with u tonight. call me. i love u. |
| Dev1234 2006-10-01 ch 7, | abusegreat and wonderful story cant wait till you update! |
| Dev1234 2006-09-29 ch 5, | abuseyour story is awesome! I cant wait to finish reading it! |
| lemurperson 2006-06-18 ch 7, anon. | abuseyou had to stop there didn't you? Update! I can't wait |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 7, | abuseNot to sound cliche or predictable, but who is Lady Mia? Please update as soon as possible. -JustWriter |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 6, | abuseHow moronic of him. Feh. Boys. -JustWriter |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 5, | abuseAdrion is scary, though I don't blame him. -JustWriter |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 4, | abuseO_o -JustWriter |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 3, | abuseT_T (crying symbol) -JustWriter |
| JustWriter2 2006-05-31 ch 2, | abuseLol! Good ficlet. -JustWriter |
| hecate0808 2005-12-20 ch 7, | abuseOHPlease continue! |
| li'l bling bling 2005-12-19 ch 7, anon. | abuseuh? don't leave us hangin!! i want to know what is gonna happen! |