Reviews for Return of Sephiroth: Rebellion

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MistyEyes 2005-02-01 ch 11, anon.	abuseThat's it. Seventeen and Sephiroth need to make passionate love NOW. XD
SailorEris 2005-01-21 ch 10,	abuseO_O Ok! I believe this is the strangest chapter you have written yet. And yet, I like it. 100/10
SailorEris 2005-01-21 ch 9,	abuseNice. But, what's up with 19? He seems so, I really don't know the word that I want to use here. Hey, can you do me a favor and read my first chapter (if you haven't already) and post a review telling me how the heck you post new chapters. New to the site, remember. Still figuring things out. ^_^U 100/10
shika-lazy-chan 2005-01-16 ch 11,	abuseMORE!!
Odisirus 2005-01-12 ch 10, anon.	abuseAwsome Story! hope you continue to write more
MistyEyes 2005-01-12 ch 10, anon.	abuseUm... haha on Sephiroth. HE GOT SHOT! XD So, this was like, a trip down memory lane, right? Blar. As much as I dislike Sephie, I GUESS I kind of felt sorry for the ickle kid. He did grow up to be a big meaniehead, though.
MistyEyes 2005-01-09 ch 9, anon.	abuseAll right, seriously. STONY. Anyway. Ew? You describe pain and death in a manner that's too crude for my virgin eyes. That's a compliment, by the way. Just because I didn't enjoy it doesn't mean that it's not good. The clones remind me of the androids in DBZ way back in the day. Seventeen was one hot android. cough Anyway... I'll get to the next chapter layata.
thegr8sephiroth 2005-01-01 ch 10, anon.	abuseDefinitely has potential. I would suggest that you bring back Aeris, possibly by having Sephiroth revive her... It seems like something he might do, especially as you've written him. Whatever, that's up to you. Definitely good work, though. You have found a fairly elusive creature: repentant yet badass Sephiroth. It takes a lot of skill to find that balance.
thegr8sephiroth 2005-01-01 ch 5, anon.	abuseI like this. It's fairly well written, you seem to capture Sephiroth's lingering instability and self-doubt quite well. My only complaint: you killed Vincent.
SailorEris 2004-12-16 ch 7,	abuseOk, since i can only review once per chapter, I had to go to one of the other chapters and I chose randomly and this was the one. Anyway, teh reason that I'm posting a review for this is: UPDATE WILL YA! I actually LIKE your stroy if others don't. BTW, If ya like digimon, go to search and type in the name "darksaint" and click on the first one of the two that pop up and read her stories. I think they're really good. If ya go there, tell her I said that. Later. UPDATE! ^_~
SailorEris 2004-12-15 ch 8,	abuseYO! DUDE! UPDATION PLEASE! Thank you. >_
MistyEyes 2004-12-08 ch 8, anon.	abuseOmgwtf? I sign in to leave a review and they say I've already reviewed this chapter. >.< Thus, I'm not signed in. You want some criticism? Stop with the "...". I mean, don't stop, just... use it less. Oh oh! Look at this. SHURIKEN. ^^ Unless I know nothing about FF and shruiken is something they use. shrugs Mmkay, Cloud's awake and on pms. Great. Cid's so funny. AND OMG YAY! Sephie was hardly in this chapter. ^^ Although they talked about him entirely too much. Tifa's lame. There. Like my review? See ya at school!
Noacat 2004-12-07 ch 8,	abuseWonderful story and VERY original. I likes a lot! My only suggestion. When people laugh, just say...he laughed coldly. Cus when I see haha written out...it reminds me of those old Japanese monster flicks. And that's never good. Unless it's a humorous story, in which case...thumbs up to making Japanese monster flick references. Though let's be fair. That's the only thing I can pick on with this story. It is really very good and I can't wait to see the rest of it. Hell, all writers have their own personal crutch to overcome. My problem is accidentally using loose instead of lose. I'm such a dork. GAH! I end my rambling incoherence now. Good story! Update soon, yo!
MistyEyes 2004-11-19 ch 7,	abuseOMGWTF! Why'd you do all that to Cloud? I LIKE Cloud! Make him better. Okay... you've successfully made me dislike Sephiroth even MORE than before... which was quite a bit. Ugh. Thanks a lot. -_-o
Kevin Linnane 2004-11-19 ch 8, anon.	abuseFirst i've got to say that i've played FF7 to death over the years, i'm pretty sure i've done everything possible but several people have assured me this is impossible. oh well. This is one very bold story. Reviving Sephiroth seems to be a popular theme across the many fan fics i've read but yours has a very clever twist. Claiming Sephiroth was under Jenova's control makes sense, after all even such a controlled childhood wouldn't fully explain his sudden plan to become a god through the worlds destruction. This said killing Vincent off before he had a chance to talk to his son was ambiguous. If Vincent isn't around to tell Sephiroth about his past then who will? Lucretia is dead and the members of Avalanche are unlikely to want to sit down and explain things to their greatest enemy. I look forward to seeing how this will resolve itself. It seems clear so far that Sephiroth isn't entirely free from Jenova despite her death. Some kind of residual influence perhaps? Anyway, onto the more rapidly developing problem of Shinra. Scarlet as the new President. Like it. She was probably the most forceful memeber of the council so it makes sense that she'd take charge. Can't imagine Heidegger being too happy about this though, he was never one to sit back and take abuse (which I suspect he would receive from Scarlet) unless he was genuinly powerless against the person. Perhaps a little dissent in the ranks at Shinra HQ just to give Avalanche a head start? After all, with a newly formed Shinra and Sephiroth and Vincent's demise they aren't exactly on the best starting grounds. The idea of moving the plate is the one aspect i haven't been impressed with so far. Moving something like that (especially when it's missing a chunk) can't have been easy. It Shinra have the power to do something like that then Avalanche are going to have real trouble gathering support for a war. Would you agree to fight against someone who can move their entire capital across continents? Perhaps causing problems within Shinra (Scarlet having trouble controling the council, Shiro insisting on leading out the army to hunt Sephiroth, the plate slowly subsiding due to a poor landing) would make things a little more equal. I know that it is the destiny of every hero to battle insurmountable odds and win through but such a task is for hero's alone, not for the general populace which Cloud is now looking to for help. One of the best fan fics i've read so far. Can't wait to see where it's going. If you've got any replys you can e-mail me anytime. Oh! And i'm english, which means i'm allowed to put 'u' in words such as favour and colour. You'd be amazed how may writers give me grief if I don't point this out to them. Shocking really. K

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