Wow, that was wonderful! Auron was in character too.

very nice

This was great.

:D i have noticed that Yuffie/Vincent fans are ALSO Rikku/Auron fans! xD i wonder why?
This was really cute ^_^

Very lovely... kind of sad but insightful. I really think that you got into Auron's head pretty well. :)

wow..thats so good so far..perhaps u should have auron comforting rikku about it? :P...if u get mi drip :P
haha...well keep it up!

^_- I liked it, even if it wasn't in complete synch with the ending. Actually, I rather LIKE ignoring the ending...

I really liked this--especially towards the end. It seemed like Auron. Really!

That was really nice.
"I will ask and I will comfort as best I can. I only hope that you will allow me to guard you this way, too. I only hope it is enough."
It is never nearly enough, but it's a start. ;) Keep writing.

Great diction, but a little shakey on Auron's character.

This is just too sweet. Lovely in character look at Auron with good use of language to depict his thoughts. I hope you write more stories like this.

That was lovely. Auron fics rock! Beautiful use of language and so very descriptive. I sincerely hope you continue this.

This is really sweet. Write more! I like your style of writing!

UPDATE!

You are a really good writer. You gonna right more? ^_^!