It was really , really good Addy! It kinda blew my mind , but in a good way. Write more like this.^^

Hey! You're story is gr8, I don't like AU but this one made me change my way of thinking eh?
You do have some spelling mistakes, Battousi is Battousai, and some words in english like sight, path, etc. But I think it was a wonderful story, worth reading it.

That was such a beautiful story :sniff: Oh god it made me cry it was so touching! Anyway please keep writing and keep up with the good work!


Step follows step,
Hope follows courage,
Set your face toward danger,
Set your heart on victory.