I luv ur sotry. hop u rite mor.

I really liked this. I'm about to read the sequel too. I liked it, espescially the rivalry between Donald and Corita.

Heh, I just wanted to drop you a review~

So, one day about... three years ago?
I was googling around looking for a picture of one of the keyblades or something, just being a nerd (but I'd just beat the game, so nyeh~).
And I saw one of the google results said something about Sora having a twin!
At first I was completely confused xD

So I clicked it.

And was met with this giant wall of text.
And I couldn't escape that wall of text for the next several hours. So yeah, I was a little captivated by this story~

And I finally finished it and had gone through happy and sad and shocked and all the emotions that go with making your way through a long fanfic.

And then I navigated through the site some, and found there were tons more stories like this; eventually I found that there stories for almost literally EVERYTHING.
And after . . . maybe another year, I decided I had to make an account here, and start writing my own stuff.

Whoo~, I got off-point.
Anyway, I just wanted to come back to this story and give a big "Thank youu~!" for making such a great fic!

The first piece of fanfiction I ever read, the one that got me interested in fanfiction in the first place, and the first to help me realize that Squeenix plot-lines ARE NOT law.


And the fact that I haven't forgotten the name in three or four years must really say something.

Ego+!



[Just thought you should know.]

That was awesome!

This is an excellent story. I really likw your idea to have Corita as Sora's twin. And their brother/sister moment was very sweet. Great story, now i'm off to read its sequel (runs off to sequel)

Cool chapter. But I think Corita should have been a mermaid, like Ariel. Oh, well. Too late now!

I know how the Cat knew all that!

He was spying on them the whole time.

That 'DON'T PRESS UNLESS HEARTLESS SHIPS ARE ATTEMPTING TO SHOOT YOU OUT OF THE SKY' button is my favorites button in the whole Gummi Ship.

So... she only knows healing magic? I cant remember, does she learn any /other/ types of magic?

Oh. My. Gosh~! This was funny. Especially the part when Cid kept confusing one for the other. ^_^

Yay~! Great job!

[Just to let you know, my reviews won't say much. But that doesn't mean I don't like your story, I just want to get to the next chapter. Your fanfic is the best I've read EVER!]

Hello~! I absolutely love this story! Especially the 'twin thing' seeing as I myself am a twin. And Riku losing to a coconut is really funny.

[I know you're already finished with this, and I've actually already read it before but didn't feel like reviewing. So now I'm back and I'm going to leave a review on every chapter. That includes your other two stories as well. I hope you could find the time to email me sometime.]

due. riku's in a skirt! lol

Love your story! By the way, Sora's half dolphin in Atlantica. Sharks swim with their tails moving side to side, while dolphins swim like Sora does, with tails moving up and down. This also explains the fact that you can use "dolphin kick" by pressing O in KH2...

Kupo3: You wrote "I'm over it not" instead of "I'm over it now" and Heartess instead of Heartless, and...
Sora53: QUIT RIDICULING ME!
Kupo3: Your the one who told me to use proper grammar in ficcy writing...
Sora53: STOP IT! YOU ARE USING MY WORDS AGAINST ME, THEY WERE TYPOS!
Kupo3: Grammatically incorrect typos...
Sora53: YA ~throws box at Kupo3~
Kupo3: Cool! Ow! A box of little capes... it'll make Sora so happy... hey, Sora ~goes to Sora~
Sora%3: ~writes: Note to Self, don't throw things at Kupo3~