That kinda sucked no offense. LIke the idea and everything was good, but you got the lyrics all wrong!

When dreaming I'm guided through another world

Time and time again

At sunrise I fight to stay asleep

'Cause I don't want to leave the comfort of this place

'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape

From the life I live when I'm awake

So let's go there

Let's make our escape

Come on, let's go there

Let's ask can we stay?

Can you take me higher?

To the place where blind men see

Can you take me higher?

To the place with golden streets

Although I would like our world to change

It helps me to appreciate

Those nights and those dreams

But, my friend, I'd sacrifice all those nights

If I could make the Earth and my dreams the same

The only difference is

To let love replace all our hate

So let's go there

Let's make our escape

Come on, let's go there

Let's ask can we stay?

Up high I feel like I'm alive for the very first time

Up high I'm strong enough to take these dreams

And make them mine

uh... the song was ok, but it seemed more sailor Moon-ish, though. i dont feel that any of the charicters would really act like that. and the song... ehhhhh, hey! its your first! i havnt seen any song fics like that, usually ppl use them in a story. im not flaming you, because i dont flame, im just saying. i wish you the best of luck

YAY! CREED ROX! DUDE! *starts singing yellow submarine, realizes it's not creed, sings wash away those years instead* Oh, yeah, I should probably read this now, shouldn't I? *scrolls up and actually reads story* Oh! Yes, this is very good. DO MORE CREED! POSSIBLY LIFEHOUSE! OR... well, okay, Green Day *WOULD* be a bit weird for a song fic... but... GREEN DAY ROX! Hehe... sorry.

well, i like the song. and i must say that the fic was good. but most songfics have more fic than song. but this is different. and most of the songs are better than the fics, too, so i'd rather hear the song. but in this case the fic was good. do i make sense? do i ever? no. well, it was nice.

OH,GOSH! I'm sorry, that's gotta be a first! But please, write your own stuff!

Hmmm . . . not bad! On the whole I prefer R/H, but I can tolerate H/H fics when they're well-written like this one. The song was a little out of place with the story, but that's ok . . . it didn't take away too much. Keep writing! Cheers****Shan

Heh heh...the ending is cute! :) I'm a H&H supporter! Write more for them!

Very great for a first songfic!

Hello! That was cool! Romance too, isn't that sweet! H/H forever! Heehee! Groovy, it's nice to finally know the lyris to "Higher." I never knew the lyrics before because I couldn't understand the man when he was singing! No matter! Keep those wonderful fics coming, and remember to spell check. Peace out!

Don't you hate when an idea sounds great in your mind, but you can never get it down on paper the way you want it? That happens to me all the time, but this was still good, I love Creed (What can I say, I'm a Rocker at heart) and that was a bit vauge, but that's what made it good, leaving people in mystery. I like to get long reviews, so I'm trying to find other things to say to you (I love getting long reviews). Good for a first songfic, at least you can write a songfic, I'm very bad at it, I won't even bring myself to post some of the ones I've written. I feel that this is now long enough, hope you keeo writing Stargirl