Awesome! I am so going to go and check out the art of veiling(?) out from the library or some place

Awesome tale! So well done! I really enjoyed your AU and loved how it ended. So glad I got you story off of GreenGecko's favs.

yay! my suposition was correct!
yay! *swirl somber in circles, until he hisses and scratch her*
thanks for the chap, Harry will be a fury when he hears about it, but he will be also relieved

I'm so glad you wrote the sequel. I'm all about closure. How funny that my husband just watched a program on Stonehenge last night.

Again your Harry/Snape interactions are marvelous. The expressiveness of Sombre is great too, especially before Harry learns the truth. Who would've thought that Snape could purr? I loved the Blaise character (even if she was a boy in canon) and I'm happy with what you did with Draco too.

The epilogue worked for me. I'm glad you gave Harry his happy ending even if it did take a decade or too. I really liked how Snape confronted Harry in Chapter 20 about his anger and pain before instilling that last hope. Great job.

great closure there

one question though..who's his girlfriend?

love the ending

i could see the 'oh **' experession on ss face when hp tried to hug him..silly man..let the kid have his hug!

*muwah* I could kiss u since some way you kept severus alive, I can't wait to figure out HOW! I can see him as a stubbron black cat..

oh u better not have just killed severus

gr

oh ho FUDGE IS DEAD wooho

so glad that one happened WOP!

A fantastic, well-thought out story, just like its predecessor. Well done!
Just a tiny, niggling point: you keep saying "aisle" when I think you mean "corridor" or "hall". Aisles are found in churches and on planes, and in between rows of seats, houses have corridors or halls. Oh, and the past tense of "to cast" is "cast", no -ed! :)
Sorry, I'm anal, I know. Can' help it, I'm an English teacher *ducks and hides* And I really have to say that your story is much better written and more coherent, adhering to spelling and grammar rules, than a lot of stories I have found here. And that includes those written by native speakers of English!
Keep it up! I'll be keeping my eyes open for your stories.

that was the crappiest epilogue ever. your attempt at mystery ruined the harry-snape moments because there was this nameless -- entity, thing, whatever there to distract.

i agree with your mum though. the story deserved for harry to get his eyesight back.

ah! WHAT? i mean WHAT?

Blaise is a girl?

Blaise Zambini is a boy. not a girl. just thought you should know.
email me if you have any questions at

Hey Lantz!

I love how you started this sequel!

-x- Malou