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| Sarkney101 2005-01-02 ch 5,  | abuseI just started reading your stories today and I love them. Please update them. I've got to add this to my favorites. It's so good update please. |
| BudgetBuddy 2003-10-25 ch 1, | abusePoor Vaughn, cool idea showing what Vaughn went through, I really want to know about the ring please upadte really really soon. |
| MelodyAnne 2003-09-21 ch 5, | abuseGeez, what is Sloane up to?!? I'm so glad the season starts soon. As good as your fic is, I'm tired of having to settle for speculation about what's going on. Anyway, good chapter, I hope you update soon! |
| JoAnn13 2003-06-26 ch 4, | abusei guess he took the suspension! well, he was pretty ** off! lol update soon:) |
| Total Vartan Lover 2003-06-23 ch 3, | abuseGood start, like how you're going to make it from mike's p.o.v and why do i have the feeling mike isn't who the ring is meant for? update soon. and please check out my story too, okay, " the other side of the story," thanks so much. leo's l'il sista |
| Ms.MV 2003-06-23 ch 3, | abuseThis is really good!I can't wait for more! I hope you'll update soon... --Ms.MV-- |
| LinZ(naughty/nice/brilliant... 2003-06-22 ch 3, anon. | abusewell it was pretty good and i agree with you about there being a need to convey what vaughn went through and his angst instead of only the apparent angst on sydneys part for vaughns apparent "marriage" but i do hope you plan to skip ahead to the finale some time in the near future, the fact that vaughn went through a lot of pain during sydneys absense needs to be adressed and is rarely taken to the extent that it should be in a lot of the post telling fic's on this site but going through each and every attempt to find sydney that must have occured during her dissapearance would get a little monotanous and redundant, dont get me wrong its not the least bit like that yet im just saying i wouldnt spend like 20 chapters explaining his day by day, or even week by week anguish over his loss eventually i would fast forward to where the telling actually left off if i were you but hey its your story! LinZ PS: i like the way you dealt with the ring thing ive been desperatly trying to figure out a way that he could be wearing the ring and not end up that hes married next season...trust me im an alias finatic i practialy cried during both the 1st season finale and the 2nd anywayz ya got yourself a fan here update soon PPS: hey check out my story "light will turn to black" |
| MelodyAnne 2003-06-22 ch 3, | abuseScary! But why does everything always have to blow up? Someone should get shot or something for once, not blown to pieces. Everyone blows everything up... |
| monica 2003-06-22 ch 3, anon. | abuseGreeat chapter, i hope that you update soon ! |
| JoAnn13 2003-06-15 ch 1, | abuseupdate soon! ;) |
| Valoriahn 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseHey! I am one of those people that are tired of all these after finaly fics, but I really like this one! :D PLEASE! I cant wait for the next chapter! :D |
| boy scout 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abusei like it alot update soon ill be warching!! good job.:) |
| monica 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abusegreat story so far, hope you update soon |
| Heid 2003-06-08 ch 1, anon. | abuseLoved it. I look forward to finding about his phone and where else you take this story. Great beginning! |
| star16 2003-06-07 ch 1, | abusegreat chpater explaining what happened plz continue soon! i want to read more! |