This is very well-written and already has me hooked! Looking forward to reading more :)

I looooooove this story!

Great!

i love it

I enjoyed your story very much. Helping Anne and her kids was a great idea. I've always wanted Buffy to find out how things turned out for her. Nice to see Hank coming off as a nice guy instead of a heartless, non-caring father. Glad he took Buffy's calling so well. Great story. Thanks

This was really good! I've always wanted Buffy and Lilly to meet again, and you are an excellent writer. Hooray! I'm also glad you made Hank a good guy again. He took it much better than Joyce did.

nice ending. good story too.

I really liked this. Hank Summers was barely mentioned on the show, and hardly ever used in fanfic. The line about Buffy almost feeling sorry for the demons she's sending Anya and Cordy to negotiate with was very funny.

Nice one. :)

Great work! I found your page from slincoln's favorite authors. This was a really enjoyable, exciting story. Normally I like tales with more twists and turns but your writing style is so effective that I really liked thiseven though it was more linear than what I'm usually into. Will we ever see a sequel?

Great story, I really liked reading about Hank's reaction to Buffy and Buffy's reaction to the Angel Investigations staff.

"fire bad, tree pretty."

*Nice*...very, very nice. Kudos on the focus on Hank - a Real (with flaws) Person, not the simplistic deadbeat dad villian he's usually portrayed as. As of this reading, no nit-picks to make (ie, would take a more in-depth read-through, which I can't be rsed to do right now. Sorry.) However, some of chapter 2 is missing - might want to re-up-load that one.

i have been reading your key of dagon fic for ags and decided to check out your other fics. really liked this, was well written and a good plot. kind of like a random episode of buffy.

Oh, awesome story. Very cool. Not sure when this takes place in Buffy the Vampire Slayer, or in Angel, but still cool.