this story is pretty good. i like that fact that RYU and KASUMI got together. i think it is a little fruity that hayate forgave kasumi so fast though.

Saa... it's a shame that you haven't touched this fic in so many years. I'm a RyuxKasumi fan shortly (immediately) after playing DOA2. Ryu is what I imagine the epitome of true Samurai. I find him something to be admired; and although the old Asian traditions and philosophy are hard to understand in contemporary society, I can't help but feel fascination for this enigma of a character.

Whatever avenue your writing career chooses to take, I realy loved this one.

Hey its preety cool your story just carefull with dialogues and spelling ok? well continue pliss with the story cause I cant wait to see what is next

Mina:AYANE IS THE BIGGEST BITCH IN DA WORLD! I CAN'T BELIEVE HER! *starts throwing things in her anger*

Taka:CALM DOWN MINA! She really does love your story she just hates *ducks as a tv flies past her head* ayane. Love the *jumps as a lamp flies low* Haybusa Kasumi fluff! *sidesteps a candle* Update!

Hmm... I like it. But I think you should focus on Kasumi and Ryu's relationship a bit more. Make it develop into a REAL realation ship. Perhaps in the next chapter you could focus on Kasumi sorting out her feelings for him. Just my opinion.
Ja ne,
Gray

wow well this is interesting...hm well its good

I liked it. It was once again well written. You need to proofread your work or have a beta reader. In the last paragraph you wrote Kagome instead of a Kasumi. _

Wow. This is really good. There is only one problem. You kept using the name Ryo instead of Ryu.

Oh oh! I like this a lot! Please Update! I really enjoy this! It's got the right amount of everything

Kyaah! I wanna see how well Kasumi could fight in your fic! Yep! Aww...HAYATE IS TOO CRUEL! Aww...continue soon anyways!

Revenge... I wonder what Kasumi has in stored for her siblings. I love Kasumi/Hayabusa fics! Please continue it!

VOL-chan

I didn't get to thoroughly read your story. I'm in Tech Ed. Mrs. Paydon'll kill me. But it was suspenceful! YAY!

geat story! ilove so much, this story is a winner. i just love it so much keep going before i die!

HAA:Way to goo keep going!

Ama: (Not here at the moment but she would say the same)