|Reviews for Runaway|
| devilgrl1 10/7/07 . chapter 2
this story is pretty good. i like that fact that RYU and KASUMI got together. i think it is a little fruity that hayate forgave kasumi so fast though.
| Guest 7/13/06 . chapter 2
Saa... it's a shame that you haven't touched this fic in so many years. I'm a RyuxKasumi fan shortly (immediately) after playing DOA2. Ryu is what I imagine the epitome of true Samurai. I find him something to be admired; and although the old Asian traditions and philosophy are hard to understand in contemporary society, I can't help but feel fascination for this enigma of a character.
Whatever avenue your writing career chooses to take, I realy loved this one.
| Grey Shade 4/2/05 . chapter 2
Hey its preety cool your story just carefull with dialogues and spelling ok? well continue pliss with the story cause I cant wait to see what is next
| Yumi Mihara 5/29/04 . chapter 2
Mina:AYANE IS THE BIGGEST BITCH IN DA WORLD! I CAN'T BELIEVE HER! *starts throwing things in her anger*
Taka:CALM DOWN MINA! She really does love your story she just hates *ducks as a tv flies past her head* ayane. Love the *jumps as a lamp flies low* Haybusa Kasumi fluff! *sidesteps a candle* Update!
| Graywords-girl 4/6/04 . chapter 2
Hmm... I like it. But I think you should focus on Kasumi and Ryu's relationship a bit more. Make it develop into a REAL realation ship. Perhaps in the next chapter you could focus on Kasumi sorting out her feelings for him. Just my opinion.
| ultimate-ruler92 4/5/04 . chapter 1
wow well this is interesting...hm well its good
| Rex J. Nibcore 4/4/04 . chapter 2
I liked it. It was once again well written. You need to proofread your work or have a beta reader. In the last paragraph you wrote Kagome instead of a Kasumi. _
| Rex J. Nibcore 4/4/04 . chapter 1
Wow. This is really good. There is only one problem. You kept using the name Ryo instead of Ryu.
| Mia 12/13/03 . chapter 1
Oh oh! I like this a lot! Please Update! I really enjoy this! It's got the right amount of everything
| DeliciousAmbiguity 10/14/03 . chapter 1
Kyaah! I wanna see how well Kasumi could fight in your fic! Yep! Aww...HAYATE IS TOO CRUEL! Aww...continue soon anyways!
| Venus Of Love 9/12/03 . chapter 1
Revenge... I wonder what Kasumi has in stored for her siblings. I love Kasumi/Hayabusa fics! Please continue it!
| Spectra16 6/9/03 . chapter 1
I didn't get to thoroughly read your story. I'm in Tech Ed. Mrs. Paydon'll kill me. But it was suspenceful! YAY!
| serenity 6/8/03 . chapter 1
geat story! ilove so much, this story is a winner. i just love it so much keep going before i die!
| UrbanPhoenix 6/8/03 . chapter 1
HAA:Way to goo keep going!
Ama: (Not here at the moment but she would say the same)