This was a Lovely detailed Story, for a first chapter, I'm really impressed.
I have a thing for vampire genre, especially when it's mixed with Beautiful bishies like the characters of Weiss Kreuz.
Aya always looks so ethereal in appearance, he'd make a Sexy vampire.

I know this chapter hadn't updated in awhile, but i hope sooner or later, the rest of the chapters will be updated.

Take care, & Awesome Vampire story concept.

~M~ v~v

whoa... keep goin'! ^^

Right, right. A beautiful sex fiction and you write "TO BE CONTINUED..." then... then...
Do nothing. :3 Evil woman.
Very nice, by the way.

WOW! I LOVED this! Please write more soon. ^_^

Hi^^ I would really like it if you continued this^^ I enjoyed erading it...Seriously...

OMG! I absolutely loved this! I love your descriptive writing. You need to write more of this!

More! More! More! More! -=^_^=-

I wonder if Aya will be angry when he finds out what Ken did to his car...

[blink blink blink]

It was a good lemon- but hun, you used to many analogies...

[rubs her eyes]

I got so confused through that lemon and it was a bit hard to follow... but don't get me wrong- it was a good lemon- and yes- it could definetly use a next part- but tone down on the descriptions too much because it makes my head hurt...

[holds her head]

hai...

OOh, this was good. Very yummy and steamy. Please continue!! Will you give anything!! Yep yep!! I LOVE this story..Anyways, write more!

sugoi! that was so damn cool^^! really love it! i love the lemon scene ( of course who wouldn't ;) ? ), and ken's changing state of emotion during the sex...

love you for making this a series ;)! i'm eagerly waiting for the next parts to come... hopefully will turn out to be more sexy than this one eheheheheh