Very sweet n.n

Very wonderful story... love the iruka and naruto parts...
baibai>yukie

Oh, what a sweet turn it took at the end! I expected angst through and through, but that was very original. I guess Iruka can be happy, sometimes, too, ne?

~Miiko

Wow... just wow.

Don't really understand the end, but very cute fic. Kakashi/Iruka isn't my favorite pairing, but it isn't bad. Naruto/Iruka seems ... wrong to me. Adult/child relationships seem wrong to me. Iruka is like a father to Naruto, and sex kinda breaks that bond... Terrific fic though, love to see more.

aw, that was so...bubbly and happy at the end. Ur a good writer ^_^. anou, what was the question that Iruka asked Kakashi? *is totally in the dark*

Yay for more Iruka, written realistically.

this is created

Iyah, absolutely gorgeous. The 'February/crocus' bit at the end rounded off the entire fic (which was beautifully written and worded) nicely, and everything was just so poetic... it definitely had that defining music quality that just absorbs you while you read. Anyway. This is on my favourites.

. : flores para mi amor : .
What is the poem thingy at the beginning and end of the fanfiction itself? Did you write it?
It would have surprised me, how at the end Iruka's attention in thoughts turned from Naruto to Kakashi.
Iruka's thoughts on Naruto, though, really surprised me but I could understand why he thought that way, too. Before, I never gave Iruka any thought to how he might have felt, becoming a father/older brother-figure to Naruto.
How Iruka saw Naruto, the demon [wonderfully stated by his "The last meal he had seen the kid eating had been his parents; he'd rather liked having parents" statement.] and Naruto, the ninja is different, but I think you captured the point where Iruka is beginning to accept Naruto perfectly.
~rain-streaked
[>.

I love your style, it's just so, so...well, some people have a way with words and I guess it's you!

Inner self: *cries anime style* this is so poetic! i love it! wah!
Outer self: i must admit, it was rather good...

Beautifully written. Interesting way to look at Iruka's character, and I especially liked the way you portrayed Kakashi in Iruka's eyes.

"like the great heroes who save swooning ladies in tight dresses from loss of virtue at the hands of the bad guy and wind up taking it themselves by the end of the day anyway."
You know, when I read this kind of sentence I'm sure you're a Pratchett fan...
*cough* That was so not the point.
I like the idea of Iruka reinforcing the seal by being sort of a surrogate father to Naruto...
I like the whole story, too. ^__^

... that was beautiful.