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the naru foxxx
2009-09-30 . chapter 3
I wood love to read more so
Plwease wright more it has a
Good plot a intersting cupel
It is filed with good romace
And grate huomer I love this
Story it is so going to be a fav the part with the photos
Was funny so was the part
When she pretended to cry
Not to menthion when they
Wher holding up the rateing
Sines whilethe other 2 fote
Eath other
the naru foxxx
2009-09-30 . chapter 1
Omg I love this story is looks
And sounds really good
BoldEagle
2008-11-12 . chapter 3
Please finish this story. Or at least get a new chapter out.
Charlie
2008-09-29 . chapter 3
Cuteness.

Although the first half of ch 3 is a repost of ch 2
Just FYI
Dlikee
2008-08-28 . chapter 3
i really like the way its been put together, very true to the comic (mostly) just wish you had finished it
DCWestby
2008-07-17 . chapter 1
Another way to look at this is the aspects. Guys look at things logically. Akane, in Ranma's PoV, can handle and get to safety on her own. Whereas Nabiki would have been at least badly injured from the fall.

Akane has far too much experience of getting her own way, or basking in the limelight. She is far too into the "spoiled little girl" mentality to realize that the interactions Ranma has with others, at least from the series standpoint, are mostly not asked for or wanted by Ranma himself. She has very little in the way of perception and often misconstrues events in her mind. Hence, this is why chapter 17, and this offshoot of it, exist. Ranma should've stayed with Nabiki in my opinion.

Good story, keep writing
asdfasdfasdfasdf
2008-06-22 . chapter 3
I, for one, really like this ff. It is just a little confusing that chapters 3 and 4 have 2 chapters in them, so please fix that.
frytrix
2008-04-07 . chapter 3
keep it up...
Kage Mizu Ryu
2007-09-21 . chapter 3
Please update soon
King of Darkness
2007-08-30 . chapter 3
Wow! Great story! Much better from some of the other Ranma/Nabiki pairings I've read. Keep up the good work!
Michael The-Zorch Haney
2006-12-10 . chapter 3
I hope you can continue this story. Its a great start so far. I like Ranma+Nabiki fics almost as much as I like Ranma+Kasumi fics. Please continue this story when you can.
anonyman
2006-09-21 . chapter 3
Not bad, but I think you need to finish this thing.
Otritzi
2006-04-09 . chapter 3
Not bad...I'm actually liking these Ranma Nabiki fics more than I thought I would. It's interesting watching the "Ice Queen" melt and open up to the Wild one.

Keep the chapters coming!
Dralan Asguard
2005-12-09 . chapter 3
i have enjoyed this story so far...and i would actually like to see it to the end...what ever that end may be
author
2005-06-20 . chapter 3
will you update this soon? i like it a lot.
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