You could have done better with the ending! But still it was a very good story!

Hi Claire great chapter keep up the great work

UPDATE!

woo hoo! u updated again! ur story is so good! AND I HATE SHELLEY! WHAT DID SHE DO TO! I HATE HER! dang, they should do this on hte show, it would be so good. it could be one of those episodes on video and then on tv they just say that flynn left forever (thats if he does get caught) and they wouldnt let on any clues about wot happened. i would so buy that video. it would be cool and then in the credits it says written by Claire01. anyway, i blabbering now. good story and keep it up!

OMG, I've barely begun Chap 14 of my fic & now you've done 2 chaps in a week! Know what you mean about time, I get in from work late (um...& chat on phone a lot...)& have v.busy weekends. Anyway, great story, brilliant twist having Flynn as a baddie and very, very well written as always :))

OK, WHAT'S SHELLEY DONE TO BIRKETT!? I LIKE BIRKETT! I SAY BRING BACK BIRKETT!
Phew! Sorry! Aww, but how sweet was that last bit!? Kirsty and Kane are just so damn good together!
LOVIN' your work!
Caz :-)

Uh-oh! Wow, I thought it would be hard to imagine the nice, kind Flynn as a baddie, but the way you write makes it so easy!
Let's hope they rescue Kirsty in time - and lock up Flynn!
Thanks for a great fanfic - keep up the good work!
Caz :-)

yay! you updated! woo hoo! OMG where did they go? wheres the car? aw, poor kane, i feel so sorry for him. keep updating ur doing an excellent good!

update plz plz pwetty plz! ur story is so good, im referring it to my friends

OMG!
i havent read anyones fanfics in ages so I'm kinda cathcing up on them all. And OMG at this one! Last time i read it, the most serious thing kirsty was dealing with was choosing between Kane and Seb. (Hmm, difficult one...). I've finally caught up and suddenly, Flynn is attempting to gun down half of SB!
Wicked story! i love it. Cant wait for more. I hope Kane comes and saves her! more soon please?

You updated at last! Is this fanfic called Unexpected Return cos no one ever knows when the next chapter will be? ;o) Only j/k, great story, & Im enjoying following it.

WOW! What an amazing story! So many twists and turns! And I definitely didn't think it was gonna be Flynn! Hope Kirsty's OK!
Oh, and LOL at Josh! Hee hee!
Thanks for a great fanfic - please continue soon!
Caz :-)

I can't believe that Flynn is the shooter he is going to pay for hurting Kane and holding Kane hostage

wow! very god! i think they should really do this on hte show! excellent! never thought flynn would be the one to do that! u gotta up, seriously! excellent, really intense. like i said they should do this on tv. cant wait to see wot happens!

Hey this story is great please contiune and can you read my story Stalker on the Bay it rated R so you will have to go thier thanks, bye can't wait for the next chapter